The Blood-Red Rose
a loop poem, for the contest10 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
Beautiful gospel message in your loop poem, Dawn! Loved how from the very first loop you used a different meaning of "rose" to make the most of this challenging poem! Congratulations on your prize!!
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2022
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Beautiful gospel message in your loop poem, Dawn! Loved how from the very first loop you used a different meaning of "rose" to make the most of this challenging poem! Congratulations on your prize!!
Comment Written 12-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2022
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Thanks so much, Helen -- how lovely!
Comment from dragonpoet
Dawn,
This is a nicely done spiritual loop poem which clearly describes what God and Jesus did and does for us.
I like the artwork which show the love of the sacrifice.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Congrats on the third place finish in the contest.
Joan
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Dawn,
This is a nicely done spiritual loop poem which clearly describes what God and Jesus did and does for us.
I like the artwork which show the love of the sacrifice.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Congrats on the third place finish in the contest.
Joan
Comment Written 12-Aug-2022
Comment from Carol Clark2
A great loop poem, with a beautiful message. I like that it truly loops back to your initial word. This is a difficult poetic form, and you've done it well. Best wishes in the contest.
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A great loop poem, with a beautiful message. I like that it truly loops back to your initial word. This is a difficult poetic form, and you've done it well. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2022
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a nicely written loop poem. Nice font choice and colour and blends well with your photo choice. I love that song . The rise very beautiful lyrics. Good luck in the contest.
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This is a nicely written loop poem. Nice font choice and colour and blends well with your photo choice. I love that song . The rise very beautiful lyrics. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2022
Comment from Paul McFarland
This is a very nice loop poem. Great picture to go with the poem. The cello piece was outstanding - one of my favorite songs. You should do well in the contest.
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This is a very nice loop poem. Great picture to go with the poem. The cello piece was outstanding - one of my favorite songs. You should do well in the contest.
Comment Written 02-Aug-2022
Comment from Teri7
Dawn, This is a very beautiful and very well written poem about the rose! The Rose of Sharon. What lovely and beautiful words and music. Thank you so much for sharing. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, Teri
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Dawn, This is a very beautiful and very well written poem about the rose! The Rose of Sharon. What lovely and beautiful words and music. Thank you so much for sharing. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 02-Aug-2022
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job with your contest entry, Dawn. I enjoyed
reading it. Great job with the loop words. Each fits in seamlessly
in the line where it's used. I liked the color scheme, the image,
and the true message.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan
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You did a great job with your contest entry, Dawn. I enjoyed
reading it. Great job with the loop words. Each fits in seamlessly
in the line where it's used. I liked the color scheme, the image,
and the true message.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan
Comment Written 02-Aug-2022
Comment from evilynne
What a lovely poem, a tribute to love and faith. The music and accompanying video are great, and the lyrics to the song are wonderful in adding to the piece. Best of luck in the contest! Evi
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What a lovely poem, a tribute to love and faith. The music and accompanying video are great, and the lyrics to the song are wonderful in adding to the piece. Best of luck in the contest! Evi
Comment Written 02-Aug-2022
Comment from royowen
Yes indeed Jesus is the rose of Sharon, we are the thorns, that caused Him to bleed, and yet we are His crown, given to Him, because He loves the cause of His agony, what a saviour we have, beautifully written Dawn, you're a credit to poetry club, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2022
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Yes indeed Jesus is the rose of Sharon, we are the thorns, that caused Him to bleed, and yet we are His crown, given to Him, because He loves the cause of His agony, what a saviour we have, beautifully written Dawn, you're a credit to poetry club, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 02-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2022
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Thank you so much, Roy!
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Bless you
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Thank you, my friend. I hope you have a super day!
Comment from kahpot
What a wonderful loop and take from this song, if I had one suggestion it would be to complete the loop-as the poem starts with "behold" so should it end with "behold" as a loop connects, very well done and the video is great, best wishes in your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2022
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What a wonderful loop and take from this song, if I had one suggestion it would be to complete the loop-as the poem starts with "behold" so should it end with "behold" as a loop connects, very well done and the video is great, best wishes in your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 02-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2022
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What an excellent suggestion -- done -- thank you!
