Use Time Wisely
Love One Another15 total reviews
Comment from Fleedleflump
It's a lovely message, and one I think all could benefit from - expending one's energy on frustration and anger just leads to resentment and decay, when time could be spent feeling good! I think positivity breeds positivity and that's the way to go. Your loop poem felt natural and unforced, which is more than I can say for some :-)
Mike
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2022
It's a lovely message, and one I think all could benefit from - expending one's energy on frustration and anger just leads to resentment and decay, when time could be spent feeling good! I think positivity breeds positivity and that's the way to go. Your loop poem felt natural and unforced, which is more than I can say for some :-)
Mike
Comment Written 02-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2022
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Thanks Mike, for your ongoing support.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the Loop Poetry Contest. I like the style with the repeating words.
Nice presentation. Your words flow well with descriptive words that paint a clear picture.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2022
Excellent entry for the Loop Poetry Contest. I like the style with the repeating words.
Nice presentation. Your words flow well with descriptive words that paint a clear picture.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
Comment Written 01-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2022
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Thank you for your comments and rating. I find this form quite restrictive,
Comment from Theodore McDowell
I love the mural you painted. So, you are multi-talented! Nice loop poem for the contest. In fact, it's a very well-crafted poem, but I'm not a big fan of a loop poem (I think the strict structure drains the poem of powerful imagery). Nevertheless, you are exhibiting the wide range of your poetic gift, and that is exactly who Sandra is! I think the poem will do great in the contest. Good luck, my friend.
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reply by the author on 01-Aug-2022
I love the mural you painted. So, you are multi-talented! Nice loop poem for the contest. In fact, it's a very well-crafted poem, but I'm not a big fan of a loop poem (I think the strict structure drains the poem of powerful imagery). Nevertheless, you are exhibiting the wide range of your poetic gift, and that is exactly who Sandra is! I think the poem will do great in the contest. Good luck, my friend.
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Comment Written 01-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2022
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Thanks, I appreciate your support. It is a restrictive form. The mural started as a labor of love, but after a few weeks it became a "damn when will I finish it" project. LOL Thanks!
Comment from BermyBye50
Sandra,
An amazing inspired write. It an excellent entry for the loop poetry contest. I will not be surprised if your entry wins. I'll take second or third.
Congrats on your second place wins in earlier contest.
I've written 120+ poems over the past two months. I received a second place for my 5-7-5 White Crystals this week and 10 third place wins this year so far.
All the best,
Eugene
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2022
Sandra,
An amazing inspired write. It an excellent entry for the loop poetry contest. I will not be surprised if your entry wins. I'll take second or third.
Congrats on your second place wins in earlier contest.
I've written 120+ poems over the past two months. I received a second place for my 5-7-5 White Crystals this week and 10 third place wins this year so far.
All the best,
Eugene
Comment Written 01-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2022
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Yes, we have both done well this year. I joined on 11th of May, and I have placed in 11 contests: One~1st Place
Three~2nd Place
Seven~3rd Place
I appreciate your support, and I will continue to support you.
Comment from Jumbo J
Hi Sandra,
firstly... a beautiful painting my multi-talented friend.
You have penned a great message and woven the tight fabric of a very well composed loop in every last word becoming the first, of every verse, that in itself is impressive task.
Love and a helping hand... I think we as humans, all need that... and unfortunately, not all will ask.
Beautiful poem Sandra... all the very best in this contest.
With our thoughts we create...
a compassionate heart.
Kind regards,
James.
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reply by the author on 01-Aug-2022
Hi Sandra,
firstly... a beautiful painting my multi-talented friend.
You have penned a great message and woven the tight fabric of a very well composed loop in every last word becoming the first, of every verse, that in itself is impressive task.
Love and a helping hand... I think we as humans, all need that... and unfortunately, not all will ask.
Beautiful poem Sandra... all the very best in this contest.
With our thoughts we create...
a compassionate heart.
Kind regards,
James.
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Comment Written 01-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2022
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Thank you, Jumbo, for your kind and steady support. It is appreciated.
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My pleasure Sandra.