Random Rhyme and Petty Prose
Viewing comments for Chapter 15 "Cut"a collection of phenomenally mundane work.
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Comment from Ric Myworld
And they say I'm off the wall with an out-of-control imagination. It's always fun to read those very few who we never know what they might come up with next. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2022
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And they say I'm off the wall with an out-of-control imagination. It's always fun to read those very few who we never know what they might come up with next. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 02-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2022
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Thanks, Ric. Glad I tailored it back from what it had been before.
Comment from nomi338
Bill, Bill. I am starting to have some serious concerns for the possible deterioration of your mental state. I am afraid that you have just about reached the edge of sanity. Shame, he had such a promising career path..
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2022
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Bill, Bill. I am starting to have some serious concerns for the possible deterioration of your mental state. I am afraid that you have just about reached the edge of sanity. Shame, he had such a promising career path..
Comment Written 02-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2022
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I may be schizophrenic. Then so am I.
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No surprise there. That is why we get along so well.
Comment from BethShelby
So the space aliens are directing the plays and programs we're getting on TV these days. No wonder there are people who actually believe birds aren't real and most of the people in Washington are clones who died years ago.
I just read your interview with Helen. You actually sound like you might be human. That's good to know. Seriously I enjoy your writing.
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2022
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So the space aliens are directing the plays and programs we're getting on TV these days. No wonder there are people who actually believe birds aren't real and most of the people in Washington are clones who died years ago.
I just read your interview with Helen. You actually sound like you might be human. That's good to know. Seriously I enjoy your writing.
Comment Written 02-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2022
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Thanks, Beth.
Comment from Fleedleflump
lol, points for coming up with something a bit different, and I liked how you changed the reality from sci-fi set to reality to sci-fi reality. It sounds as though Dick should stay zipped up!
Mike
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2022
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lol, points for coming up with something a bit different, and I liked how you changed the reality from sci-fi set to reality to sci-fi reality. It sounds as though Dick should stay zipped up!
Mike
Comment Written 02-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2022
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I'm just glad that story is over.
Comment from sunnilicious
That's very adult content and I am an adult... So, I can handle it. Illustrative verbiage. Work is for the day and play is afterwards. Good point to remember. Well done. Excellent work
Edit note, maybe add a disclaimer for content :)
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2022
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That's very adult content and I am an adult... So, I can handle it. Illustrative verbiage. Work is for the day and play is afterwards. Good point to remember. Well done. Excellent work
Edit note, maybe add a disclaimer for content :)
Comment Written 02-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2022
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Done
Comment from kahpot
It didn't take Chet long? for him to realize someone was hitting on his girl, these aliens have really come down to earth, if only a crooked star was the problem, an excellent and humorous read, very well written****kahpot
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2022
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It didn't take Chet long? for him to realize someone was hitting on his girl, these aliens have really come down to earth, if only a crooked star was the problem, an excellent and humorous read, very well written****kahpot
Comment Written 01-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2022
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Thanks, kahpot
Comment from lyenochka
Okay, so an alien got a part to be an alien in a movie on Earth when he really was auditioning for a part in Guys and Dolls on Europa? This guy is really lost!
By the way, the script with you as the main character is up!
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2022
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Okay, so an alien got a part to be an alien in a movie on Earth when he really was auditioning for a part in Guys and Dolls on Europa? This guy is really lost!
By the way, the script with you as the main character is up!
Comment Written 01-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2022
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Alright!!
