Heart Crafted Poems - 2022
Viewing comments for Chapter 67 "Love Orchids ..."Musings of an old man - 2022
25 total reviews
Comment from miajaffri
Thank you for explaining a Rictameter. This poem is beautiful and truly splendid! The words you have chosen are soft and gentle ones, as gentle as an orchid. I especially like... nimbly nodding gently as the whisper of
a soft breeze.
t
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2022
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Thank you for explaining a Rictameter. This poem is beautiful and truly splendid! The words you have chosen are soft and gentle ones, as gentle as an orchid. I especially like... nimbly nodding gently as the whisper of
a soft breeze.
t
Comment Written 03-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2022
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t ...thank you for your review and comments. I am honored to have received one of your precious six stars for this work.
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You are welcome. Keep writing!
Comment from Janet Foor
A beautiful rictameter own for the contest. Orchids are such beautiful flowers with amazing colors. Thank you for your authors notes which was a nice reminder of the various parts of the orchid.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2022
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A beautiful rictameter own for the contest. Orchids are such beautiful flowers with amazing colors. Thank you for your authors notes which was a nice reminder of the various parts of the orchid.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 03-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2022
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Janet, I surely do appreciate your review.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Lovely artwork and nice presentation.
-You wrote a very good poem for it.
-Good syllable count and imagery,
along with the choice for the opening and closing.
-The delicate imagery is very good, like
"nimbly nodding gently."
-I like the gem comparison and the color imagery, too.
-A very good entry; good luck!
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2022
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-Lovely artwork and nice presentation.
-You wrote a very good poem for it.
-Good syllable count and imagery,
along with the choice for the opening and closing.
-The delicate imagery is very good, like
"nimbly nodding gently."
-I like the gem comparison and the color imagery, too.
-A very good entry; good luck!
Comment Written 03-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2022
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Pam, I appreciate your review and good wishes,
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You are very welcome.
Comment from Wendy G
Beautiful. Smoothly flowing with imagery which pleases the senses, and there is a gentle quality about this which is very attractive. best wishes - I am sure this one will do very well in the contest.
Wendy
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2022
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Beautiful. Smoothly flowing with imagery which pleases the senses, and there is a gentle quality about this which is very attractive. best wishes - I am sure this one will do very well in the contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 03-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2022
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Wendy that is most kind of you, thank you!
Comment from zanya
The format of the Rictatmeter works well here in this poem portraying the delights of the classic Orchid flower while rejoicing in the delights of love -beautiful pic
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2022
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The format of the Rictatmeter works well here in this poem portraying the delights of the classic Orchid flower while rejoicing in the delights of love -beautiful pic
Comment Written 03-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2022
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zanya, your review is most kind, thank you!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Orchids are such beautiful blooms and you paid tribute to them here in your clever poem filled with fine descriptions, I especially liked: "nimbly nodding gently", love Dolly x
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2022
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Orchids are such beautiful blooms and you paid tribute to them here in your clever poem filled with fine descriptions, I especially liked: "nimbly nodding gently", love Dolly x
Comment Written 02-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2022
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Thank you, Dolly!
Comment from dragonpoet
Nicely done rictameter poem. It uses metaphor, personification, and alliteration to give a strong image of a lily. Nice choice of artwork.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2022
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Nicely done rictameter poem. It uses metaphor, personification, and alliteration to give a strong image of a lily. Nice choice of artwork.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
Comment Written 02-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2022
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Thanks, Joan, or the good wishes.
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You?re welcome.
Joan
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a nicely written rictameter poem. Beautiful overall presentation background and font choice. Photo compliments your words well. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2022
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This is a nicely written rictameter poem. Beautiful overall presentation background and font choice. Photo compliments your words well. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 02-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2022
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Joanne, thank you!
Comment from karenina
This is a very lovely theme for your well-presented Rictameter. Your count is perfect, and the left alignment seems to work beautifully, in this script-like font. Not sure why "Sepals" is capitalized? My thought was perhaps to balance the capital "S" in the first and last word "Splendid?"
Excellent image to enhance your writing!
Karenina
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2022
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This is a very lovely theme for your well-presented Rictameter. Your count is perfect, and the left alignment seems to work beautifully, in this script-like font. Not sure why "Sepals" is capitalized? My thought was perhaps to balance the capital "S" in the first and last word "Splendid?"
Excellent image to enhance your writing!
Karenina
Comment Written 02-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2022
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Karenina, Sepals is the scientific spelling for this part of the Orchid flower.
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Ah! Thanks for that info... Oxford Dictionary lists it as a noun...
I'm not up on scientific spelling!
:)
Comment from estory
This had a nice, sensual feel to it, and the images just leapt off the page. It was colorful, there were these soft textures and shapes of flower petals, very erotic, reminiscent of Georgia O'Keefe and her flower petal paintings. estory
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2022
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This had a nice, sensual feel to it, and the images just leapt off the page. It was colorful, there were these soft textures and shapes of flower petals, very erotic, reminiscent of Georgia O'Keefe and her flower petal paintings. estory
Comment Written 02-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2022
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estory, thank you for this validation.