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The Nursery

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Comment from Tom Horonzy
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Unsure if where you live things are spelled differently but nursery is our correct spelling. You may want to edit where you use the word with two u's .............................

 Comment Written 05-Aug-2022

reply by the author on 05-Aug-2022
    Thank and for your help! I have fixed the mistakes. It spells correct and you are right that it was misspelled.
Comment from lancellot
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Very nice and wholesome story. Reading this, I have no doubts this is exactly what the prompt is looking for in entries. I think what you have written will relate to many of FanStory's members.

 Comment Written 01-Aug-2022

reply by the author on 01-Aug-2022
    Thank you so much!
Comment from jessizero
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I enjoyed your story of your visiting a nursery. It sounds like you find joy in the simple things in life, which is a great thing. You expressed it well here. Thanks for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 01-Aug-2022

reply by the author on 01-Aug-2022
    Thank you!