Autumnal Winds
A sonnet12 total reviews
Comment from royowen
I can remember when a friend of mine and myself headed out in a 12 foot dinghy fishing, about 3 miles out, and was disturbed by a huge but seemingly calm swell, suddenly my friend, a seasoned fishermen, looked up, very disturbed and hurriedly strayed up the outboard and off we went, just making it before a huge storm hit. What a beautiful written sonnet you've written. Well done, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 31-Jul-2022
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I can remember when a friend of mine and myself headed out in a 12 foot dinghy fishing, about 3 miles out, and was disturbed by a huge but seemingly calm swell, suddenly my friend, a seasoned fishermen, looked up, very disturbed and hurriedly strayed up the outboard and off we went, just making it before a huge storm hit. What a beautiful written sonnet you've written. Well done, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 31-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2022
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Thank you for the great review, Ray. I love the ocean fanatically, having lived near the ocean in Long Island, New York, and now West Palm Beach, Florida. I am glad you made it before the big storm hit.
By the way, I was experimenting with colors and presentation in two browsers. Can you see the ocean picture and is the sonnet on a light blue background with a black text font?
Because when I looked on another browser, it had a different and not the best color scheme. Please tell me how you it on your computer.
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It seemed different the first time, lighter, but this one is too dark, I?m using the same device as before, the background is way too dark for the font colour, hope that helps. Bless you
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I changed the color back, it is a lighter blue?
Comment from lyenochka
Yelena! You're back and regaling us with another ocean sonnet. Of course, you love the sea. There is both beauty and sadness in these words, as well as deep devotion. Thanks for sharing your writings again!
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reply by the author on 31-Jul-2022
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Yelena! You're back and regaling us with another ocean sonnet. Of course, you love the sea. There is both beauty and sadness in these words, as well as deep devotion. Thanks for sharing your writings again!
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Comment Written 31-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2022
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Thank you so much, Helen. I have't written in a long time, and today I just decided to give it a trial run. A sonnet was the likely choice (smile). I am glad you enjoyed it. Blessings and love, Yelena
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I changed the picture too - take another look.
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Nice! 💖
