Sweet Dance
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Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, a warm and illustrative write in its brevity - fully compliant with the prompt in both word count and originality. Best wishes in the contest with this very short, but descriptive entry...
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In my opinion, a warm and illustrative write in its brevity - fully compliant with the prompt in both word count and originality. Best wishes in the contest with this very short, but descriptive entry...
Comment Written 31-Jul-2022
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Thank You!
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You are very welcome...Eve
Comment from harmony13
The author's six word poem is thought provoking, clear, interesting and
descriptive and creative. I pondered on the words of this poem and
imagined the shadows flickering on the wall! Great creativity! The
poem flows and connects well. The artwork is awesome!
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The author's six word poem is thought provoking, clear, interesting and
descriptive and creative. I pondered on the words of this poem and
imagined the shadows flickering on the wall! Great creativity! The
poem flows and connects well. The artwork is awesome!
Comment Written 31-Jul-2022
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Thank you!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
The flickering flame can be mesmerising as it dances without repetition as it is unruly as the shadows of the flame dance, I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
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The flickering flame can be mesmerising as it dances without repetition as it is unruly as the shadows of the flame dance, I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 31-Jul-2022
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Thank you!
Comment from RodG
This shortie paints a vivid picture. You succeed in personifying both the candle and the shadows. I can easily visualize the candle as a musician playing a brass instrument as the shadows swirl nearby. Nice!
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This shortie paints a vivid picture. You succeed in personifying both the candle and the shadows. I can easily visualize the candle as a musician playing a brass instrument as the shadows swirl nearby. Nice!
Comment Written 31-Jul-2022
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thank you
Comment from dellsworthpoet
A good descriptive poem. The picture adds to the feeling of the poem. The flow is good. The simple theme is enhanced by the simple words.
Thanks for a good read.
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A good descriptive poem. The picture adds to the feeling of the poem. The flow is good. The simple theme is enhanced by the simple words.
Thanks for a good read.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2022
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Thank you
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You are welcome.
Comment from royowen
I think you've chosen a brilliant piece of artwork for your great short, six word contest entry, this is a very worthy entry in this competition, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
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I think you've chosen a brilliant piece of artwork for your great short, six word contest entry, this is a very worthy entry in this competition, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 31-Jul-2022
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Thank you
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Welcome
Comment from Lloyd T. Okoko
The objective correlative of your work reminisces a festival of shadows occasioned by the flickers of a candle.
Your work earns its texture through its strict compliance with the six word specification of the entry requirements of the poetry contest.
Excellent work. Bravo.
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The objective correlative of your work reminisces a festival of shadows occasioned by the flickers of a candle.
Your work earns its texture through its strict compliance with the six word specification of the entry requirements of the poetry contest.
Excellent work. Bravo.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2022
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Thank you
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Remain Blessed.
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
The shadows can be from the candlelight, dancing against a wall or they could be shadows from two people, dancing in the light of the candle. A good entry for this six-word poetry contest. Any time you can cause the reader to stop and consider the possibilities with just a few words, you know you've written something meaningful.
Good luck with the contest.
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The shadows can be from the candlelight, dancing against a wall or they could be shadows from two people, dancing in the light of the candle. A good entry for this six-word poetry contest. Any time you can cause the reader to stop and consider the possibilities with just a few words, you know you've written something meaningful.
Good luck with the contest.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2022
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Thank you
