Quiet Lawyer
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25 total reviews
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Brilliant job on your chapter. I haven't read any of the earlier ones, but didn't need to to compel follow the storyline. Your characters are well developed, your descriptions of the surroundings great! I'm glad I came upon this.
Take care,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2022
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Brilliant job on your chapter. I haven't read any of the earlier ones, but didn't need to to compel follow the storyline. Your characters are well developed, your descriptions of the surroundings great! I'm glad I came upon this.
Take care,
Rhonda
Comment Written 31-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2022
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Jay Squires
This is a perfectly stunning chapter, Barbara. I couldn't find any mistakes, though, to be honest, the only way I could have would have been to pull myself out of the drama you had created on the screen of my mind. A slipped comma or a double-negative wouldn't be worth that. Everything was balanced and flowed. This is "seven" material!
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2022
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This is a perfectly stunning chapter, Barbara. I couldn't find any mistakes, though, to be honest, the only way I could have would have been to pull myself out of the drama you had created on the screen of my mind. A slipped comma or a double-negative wouldn't be worth that. Everything was balanced and flowed. This is "seven" material!
Comment Written 31-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2022
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Thank you for the kind review and support.
Comment from Sankey
Wow! What a sad chapter and probably true to life for a lot of women even in these times. This was a dramatic and emotional read and no spags. Thanks again.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2022
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Wow! What a sad chapter and probably true to life for a lot of women even in these times. This was a dramatic and emotional read and no spags. Thanks again.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2022
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Thank you for the kind support. Unfortunately, it is true for a lot of women.
Comment from Theodore McDowell
Wow! This is a blockbuster scene with the meeting with Amy. I loved the legal talk about back support etc. that then devolved into the emotional revelation that Amy was raped. Well done.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2022
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Wow! This is a blockbuster scene with the meeting with Amy. I loved the legal talk about back support etc. that then devolved into the emotional revelation that Amy was raped. Well done.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2022
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Thank you for the kind support.
Comment from Anne Johnston
This must have been a hard chapter to write, detailing what Amy went through. I hope Alexandra gets all the information she needs to expose Pat Rogers and get the support that Amy needs.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2022
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This must have been a hard chapter to write, detailing what Amy went through. I hope Alexandra gets all the information she needs to expose Pat Rogers and get the support that Amy needs.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2022
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It was hard to write, especially the research so I was sure to make it as realistic as possible. Thank you for the kind review.
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You are welcome
Comment from royowen
I don't know how men like Rogers can exist and carry on, although this is fiction, it makes me sick how they can get away with it, I'm pretty sure you have plane plans for Mr. Rogers, and probably wish that you could shut them all down, beautifully written dear Girl, you did well, it upset me, I know it goes on. Beautifully written, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2022
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I don't know how men like Rogers can exist and carry on, although this is fiction, it makes me sick how they can get away with it, I'm pretty sure you have plane plans for Mr. Rogers, and probably wish that you could shut them all down, beautifully written dear Girl, you did well, it upset me, I know it goes on. Beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 31-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2022
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Thank you for the encouragement.
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Welcome Barbara,
Comment from John Ciarmello
This is another great chapter, Barbara. There is no doubt Ali will help those women. This was a particularly exciting chapter. I can't wait to see Pat Rogers go down. Best, JohnC
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2022
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This is another great chapter, Barbara. There is no doubt Ali will help those women. This was a particularly exciting chapter. I can't wait to see Pat Rogers go down. Best, JohnC
Comment Written 31-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2022
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Thank you for the encouraging review.
Comment from judiverse
It's a wonder Pat wouldn't have been charged already, as he's been accused of so many rapes. It's a wonder one of the women, anyway, would have spoken up. Amy is in dire straits and definitely needs that child support money. The way you describe the boy, he's a cute kid. Surely Amy has been taking advance of the SNAP and other government assistance programs. If she'd applied for aid, they would have gone after the husband for non-support. (Sorry for offering Amy my free advice.) Great characterization. Ali really gets her point across to Amy and she's on board to sue for child support and back payment. You also do a great job of showing Ali's feelings about what she's learned from Amy. judi
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2022
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It's a wonder Pat wouldn't have been charged already, as he's been accused of so many rapes. It's a wonder one of the women, anyway, would have spoken up. Amy is in dire straits and definitely needs that child support money. The way you describe the boy, he's a cute kid. Surely Amy has been taking advance of the SNAP and other government assistance programs. If she'd applied for aid, they would have gone after the husband for non-support. (Sorry for offering Amy my free advice.) Great characterization. Ali really gets her point across to Amy and she's on board to sue for child support and back payment. You also do a great job of showing Ali's feelings about what she's learned from Amy. judi
Comment Written 31-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2022
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Nobody has made a police report. Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from country ranch writer
7/31/2022-----12:59
I hope she can nail him to the wall!
Hope Alexander cam make mat go to jail for a long time and Amy the others can get on with their lives.Matthew needs to be shown the error of his was being exposed to the public as a rapist.Any could move to a better class of neighborhood and go to school yo be a teacher.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2022
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7/31/2022-----12:59
I hope she can nail him to the wall!
Hope Alexander cam make mat go to jail for a long time and Amy the others can get on with their lives.Matthew needs to be shown the error of his was being exposed to the public as a rapist.Any could move to a better class of neighborhood and go to school yo be a teacher.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2022
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Thank you for the kind review.
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Comment from BethShelby
When Ali gets through with this serial rapist, he may not be able to pay child support if he goes to jail. It is a sobering that women could actually be caught up in situations a bad as the one Amy is in. He father is total jerk as well to refuse to listen to his daughter and to disown her. I'm enjoyed your story. I like the way you had Ali react with tears over the situation.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2022
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When Ali gets through with this serial rapist, he may not be able to pay child support if he goes to jail. It is a sobering that women could actually be caught up in situations a bad as the one Amy is in. He father is total jerk as well to refuse to listen to his daughter and to disown her. I'm enjoyed your story. I like the way you had Ali react with tears over the situation.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2022
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Thank you for the kind review. I worried about the tears being too much, but that's how I would've reacted and have at times when I've had to make student home visits.
