Jerky
perhaps all these undead can be a food-source9 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Good entry for the Zombie 5-7-5 writing prompt contest. Zombies are one of my favorite horror genres. Good syllables count and connection between lines.
Good luck in the contest,
Gypsy
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2022
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Good entry for the Zombie 5-7-5 writing prompt contest. Zombies are one of my favorite horror genres. Good syllables count and connection between lines.
Good luck in the contest,
Gypsy
Comment Written 01-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2022
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Thanks, Gypsy - really glad you liked it :-)
Comment from GARY MACLEAN
Your words have painted a clear picture of me being eaten by a zombie, but I don't get the "in reverse" part. Turning me into a zombie? I'll have none of that thank you.
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2022
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Your words have painted a clear picture of me being eaten by a zombie, but I don't get the "in reverse" part. Turning me into a zombie? I'll have none of that thank you.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2022
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In my mind, if the world fell apart after a zombie apocalypse, we might end up having to try eating the zombies, lol
Comment from Bill Schott
This zombie 5-7-5, Jerky, has the right setup and creates an unappetizing scene where either a zombie is eating someone, or some is eating a zombie. Either way -- bleeeaaaccckkk!
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2022
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This zombie 5-7-5, Jerky, has the right setup and creates an unappetizing scene where either a zombie is eating someone, or some is eating a zombie. Either way -- bleeeaaaccckkk!
Comment Written 01-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2022
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That's a great final word for it :-). Perhaps I should use it for the title!
Comment from jaded831
Nightmarishly funny, imaginative, and different. Zombies walk among us today, so many people are dead inside. Today we have to be afraid to even go out. Your picture brings it home. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2022
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Nightmarishly funny, imaginative, and different. Zombies walk among us today, so many people are dead inside. Today we have to be afraid to even go out. Your picture brings it home. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2022
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Hehe, thank you :-). This turned out far nastier than I planned, but I'm glad you saw the sense of humour lurking beneath!
Comment from Gert sherwood
Fleedleflump between your excellent 5-7-5 horror and the image of
the Zombie, you have a great entry for a prompt.
I have no desire to chew on jerky skin
Gert
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2022
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Fleedleflump between your excellent 5-7-5 horror and the image of
the Zombie, you have a great entry for a prompt.
I have no desire to chew on jerky skin
Gert
Comment Written 31-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2022
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Thank you, Gert :-). I set out to write a funny one but it turned out horrid, lol
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You are most welcome my fanstory friend
Gert
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
It's a good entry to the 5-7-5 Zombie contest. The syllable count is accurate. The visual fits perfectly. The text is large and easy to read. Your presentation is well-done. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2022
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It's a good entry to the 5-7-5 Zombie contest. The syllable count is accurate. The visual fits perfectly. The text is large and easy to read. Your presentation is well-done. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2022
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Thank you, Sandra :-). I'm really happy you liked it!
Mike
Comment from royowen
How fascinating, I love these zombie haikus, they bring out the ability to do anything imaginative with the pen, and it seems you have done well, good job, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2022
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How fascinating, I love these zombie haikus, they bring out the ability to do anything imaginative with the pen, and it seems you have done well, good job, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 30-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2022
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Thanks, Roy - really glad you enjoyed it :-)
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Most welcome
Comment from jessizero
I can't say more than this: Ewwwww! This is a whole new take on the zombie theme, so congratulations on that. Thanks for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2022
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I can't say more than this: Ewwwww! This is a whole new take on the zombie theme, so congratulations on that. Thanks for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2022
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Lol, thank you :-). I thought I was going to write a funny one for this, but it came out horrific!
Comment from Tina Crute
Ewww! This poem is shocking and not my kind of read, but I do like the drama, the shades of black and white presentation and the surprise meaning. You should do well in the contest !
Tina
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2022
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Ewww! This poem is shocking and not my kind of read, but I do like the drama, the shades of black and white presentation and the surprise meaning. You should do well in the contest !
Tina
Comment Written 30-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2022
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Lol, thank you, Tina :-). I set out to write something funny but it ended up nasty!
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I think nasty is effective, in this contest! Good luck!
