Hospitable Haunt
Zombie9 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Good entry for the Zombie 5-7-5 writing prompt contest. Zombies are one of my favorite horror genres. Good syllables count and connection between lines.
Good luck in the contest,
Gypsy
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Good entry for the Zombie 5-7-5 writing prompt contest. Zombies are one of my favorite horror genres. Good syllables count and connection between lines.
Good luck in the contest,
Gypsy
Comment Written 01-Aug-2022
Comment from GARY MACLEAN
Hey, this is a different take on the old zombie mystery. One of them recognizing what he/she used to be. I like the twist. Even a nice greeting before the human's brain is sucked out.
Cute.
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Hey, this is a different take on the old zombie mystery. One of them recognizing what he/she used to be. I like the twist. Even a nice greeting before the human's brain is sucked out.
Cute.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2022
Comment from Tom Horonzy
I'll never understand why people are attractive to this genre of horror. Do these ideas come from dreams? Any which way I find yours better than many others penned herein. Good luck.
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I'll never understand why people are attractive to this genre of horror. Do these ideas come from dreams? Any which way I find yours better than many others penned herein. Good luck.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2022
Comment from jaded831
Scary, that was the point. These days we are not sure, who is dead inside. Everyone appears to be alive, but maybe these crazies just want to fame. The picture adds to your presentation. Good luck in the contest.
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Scary, that was the point. These days we are not sure, who is dead inside. Everyone appears to be alive, but maybe these crazies just want to fame. The picture adds to your presentation. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2022
Comment from kahpot
Ha! Ha! though quite scary this wonderful short work as a touch of humor, your last line made me smile with the image of death coming in this way, very well written, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
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Ha! Ha! though quite scary this wonderful short work as a touch of humor, your last line made me smile with the image of death coming in this way, very well written, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 31-Jul-2022
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
It's a good entry to the 5-7-5 Zombie contest. The syllable count is accurate. The visual fits perfectly. The text is large and easy to read. Your presentation is well-done. Good luck in the contest.
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It's a good entry to the 5-7-5 Zombie contest. The syllable count is accurate. The visual fits perfectly. The text is large and easy to read. Your presentation is well-done. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2022
Comment from jessizero
This was an excellent zombie 5-7-5 poem. I would tell you my favorite line, but I loved them all. Thank you for sharing this poem here, and best wishes to you.
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This was an excellent zombie 5-7-5 poem. I would tell you my favorite line, but I loved them all. Thank you for sharing this poem here, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2022
Comment from royowen
Heh heh. I love this narrative, it's exactly what I would call, "looking at things from the perspective of a zombie." Beautifully written, hilarious but a good entry in this contest, well done, blessings Roy
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Heh heh. I love this narrative, it's exactly what I would call, "looking at things from the perspective of a zombie." Beautifully written, hilarious but a good entry in this contest, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 30-Jul-2022
Comment from Fleedleflump
I love the idea of a polite zombie, introducing themselves before going in for the feast. Perhaps all humans are what they used to be - the inevitable march of entropy, and we're all zombies, feeding on the essence of those younger than ourselves.
Mike
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I love the idea of a polite zombie, introducing themselves before going in for the feast. Perhaps all humans are what they used to be - the inevitable march of entropy, and we're all zombies, feeding on the essence of those younger than ourselves.
Mike
Comment Written 30-Jul-2022
