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Zombies are Out

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3 total reviews 
Comment from GARY MACLEAN
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Yikes, I think you got a hold of the best picture for this entry. That is how I would picture a zombie also. It would scare the wits out of me as well. Let's hope they only come out on Halloween.

Good job.

 Comment Written 01-Aug-2022


reply by the author on 01-Aug-2022
    Thank you!
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
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It's a good entry to the 5-7-5 Zombie contest. The syllable count is accurate. The visual fits perfectly. The text is large and easy to read. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 30-Jul-2022


reply by the author on 30-Jul-2022
    Thank you!
reply by Sandra Nelms-Ludwig on 30-Jul-2022
    Welcome!
Comment from Lloyd T. Okoko
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The objective correlative of your work reminisces a Halloween prompted proliferation of Zombies that are scary.

The work highlights prevailing dimensions of Halloween; with Zombies out to scare.

The work earns its texture through its effective use of assonance and a strict compliance with the entry specifications of the Zombie 5-7-5 writing prompt.

Excellent work. Bravo.

 Comment Written 30-Jul-2022


reply by the author on 30-Jul-2022
    Thank you!
reply by Lloyd T. Okoko on 31-Jul-2022
    Remain Blessed.