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"Poetry from the Broken Heart"

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Comment from country ranch writer
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7/29/2022/........2:54 pm
it us sad when somone so young becomes inflicted with kidney problems with it is even harder tomthto just stand by watching and wauting what the dictirs are going tomdo.

 Comment Written 29-Jul-2022


reply by the author on 29-Jul-2022
    In a year of Our Lord 2014 and in the Tri-state area of Delaware, South Jersey, and Philadelphia.
    Unfortunately, over 4,500 people awaited.
    "The Gift of Life"
    Yes, in the form of a Human Kidney.
    And, unfortunately 97 and a half percent got to go home.
    Go home and in body bags.
    Thanks again for reviewing this.
    Doctor Ricky
reply by country ranch writer on 29-Jul-2022
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7/29/2022/........2:54 pm
it us sad when somone so young becomes inflicted with kidney problems with it is even harder tomthto just stand by watching and wauting what the dictirs are going tomdo.

 Comment Written 29-Jul-2022


reply by the author on 29-Jul-2022
    Thanks Again countey ranch writer.
    Ricky
reply by country ranch writer on 29-Jul-2022
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The first part is very effective in imparting that sense of anguished questioning - the fundamental question of why? And then, you moved into the story of, I suspect, a part of the purpose that began to reveal itself.

Mike

 Comment Written 29-Jul-2022


reply by the author on 29-Jul-2022
    First off of course this is based on information.
    Yes, that I had received almost Twenty years agon.
    And, from a woman who works for the Gift of Life in Philadelphia.
    The name has not been changed.
    Why?
    I never knew her real name for she has never shared in three letters I've written but everything,
    Yes I will produce forward Of course is absolutely true and it's a miracle she's alive today.
    This you will realize when I get to the third and final chapter Entitled,
    "Katie's Victory!"
    Thanks,
    Doctor Ricky