Night's Unveiling
A Rhyming Acrostic10 total reviews
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job, Tina. I really liked the personification
in your acrostic. Your lines flowed smoothly with great
imagery. I liked the formatting of your lines, the color
scheme, and the art choice.
Congratulations on your win, Jan
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2022
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You did a great job, Tina. I really liked the personification
in your acrostic. Your lines flowed smoothly with great
imagery. I liked the formatting of your lines, the color
scheme, and the art choice.
Congratulations on your win, Jan
Comment Written 01-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2022
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Aw, thanks Jan. This means a lot. I am trying to get better. It's so fun, the challenge of poetry.
Comment from royowen
I think you've done a marvellous job with this acrostic, and a worthy contest winner, I love the ambiguity you've woven into this prize winning post Tina, you've done very well, great job, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2022
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I think you've done a marvellous job with this acrostic, and a worthy contest winner, I love the ambiguity you've woven into this prize winning post Tina, you've done very well, great job, blessings Roy
Comment Written 01-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2022
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Thank you, Roy. This means a lot!
Tina
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Thank you, Roy. This means a lot!
Tina
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Bless you
Comment from Teri7
Tina, This is a very lovely and well written rhyming acrostic poem you have penned and won in the contest with. Thank you for sharing. love and blessings, teri
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2022
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Tina, This is a very lovely and well written rhyming acrostic poem you have penned and won in the contest with. Thank you for sharing. love and blessings, teri
Comment Written 01-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2022
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Teri, thank you for this review and sweet note! Have you written any more children's stories that I may have missed?
Hugs!
Tina
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Teri, thank you for this review and sweet note! Have you written any more children's stories that I may have missed?
Hugs!
Tina
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are lovely, romantic, exciting, descriptive and
creative. Thank you for the author's notes - they arefilled with creativity! The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is awesome and compliments both the theme and words of this poem.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2022
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The author's words are lovely, romantic, exciting, descriptive and
creative. Thank you for the author's notes - they arefilled with creativity! The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is awesome and compliments both the theme and words of this poem.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2022
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Thank you!
Comment from samantha0930
I like your poem; it sounds really nice and romantic, and the colors are nice too. I'm also really glad you clarified the context in the notes because I didn't quite understand it the first time I read it, and it reads much better when I reread it :) It seems a little awkward that you started a rhyme scheme, but then 3 of the lines don't rhyme. One of them looks like it was supposed to, but then didn't work out because you needed to add an extra word after the rhyming word to make the beginning of the next line work. Still a good poem though :)
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2022
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I like your poem; it sounds really nice and romantic, and the colors are nice too. I'm also really glad you clarified the context in the notes because I didn't quite understand it the first time I read it, and it reads much better when I reread it :) It seems a little awkward that you started a rhyme scheme, but then 3 of the lines don't rhyme. One of them looks like it was supposed to, but then didn't work out because you needed to add an extra word after the rhyming word to make the beginning of the next line work. Still a good poem though :)
Comment Written 31-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2022
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Thank you.
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a good acrostic. It paints a nice picture. The message is clear. The first letters would stand out more if they were yellow like the sun or stars. However, it is a neatly packaged and presented poem. I wish you the best in the contest.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2022
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This is a good acrostic. It paints a nice picture. The message is clear. The first letters would stand out more if they were yellow like the sun or stars. However, it is a neatly packaged and presented poem. I wish you the best in the contest.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2022
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Good idea. Thank you!
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork and presentation.
-Your note is appreciated.
-A well written acrostic with a good topic,
effective imagery, and rhyme.
-I like the references to the formal
attire, like the "velvet tux" and
"Evening wear for dance on high."
-Good closing lines, as well.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2022
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-Very nice artwork and presentation.
-Your note is appreciated.
-A well written acrostic with a good topic,
effective imagery, and rhyme.
-I like the references to the formal
attire, like the "velvet tux" and
"Evening wear for dance on high."
-Good closing lines, as well.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2022
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Thanks!
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You are welcome.
Comment from lyenochka
Interesting to think of the "unveiling" of night as it veils others to provide the dark for those sweethearts' kisses. Lovely use of metaphor (I liked the velvet tux) and great internal rhymes. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2022
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Interesting to think of the "unveiling" of night as it veils others to provide the dark for those sweethearts' kisses. Lovely use of metaphor (I liked the velvet tux) and great internal rhymes. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 31-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2022
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Thank you!
Comment from Bill Schott
This acrostic poem, Night's Unveiling, presented with the vertical word UNVEILING, brings the readers to the beginning of the night's much anticipated events. Nice.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2022
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This acrostic poem, Night's Unveiling, presented with the vertical word UNVEILING, brings the readers to the beginning of the night's much anticipated events. Nice.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2022
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Thank you.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
In this acrostic poem, in a good flow of thoughts, speaks the truth, as if night asks the sun to unveil his new suit so that he can waltz across the sky, I enjoyed the imagery and light development of taletelling in expression; well said, well done, post god speed more, share post not 4 self-joy-pride but 4 God and readers worldwide Alcreator Litt Dear (DR)
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2022
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In this acrostic poem, in a good flow of thoughts, speaks the truth, as if night asks the sun to unveil his new suit so that he can waltz across the sky, I enjoyed the imagery and light development of taletelling in expression; well said, well done, post god speed more, share post not 4 self-joy-pride but 4 God and readers worldwide Alcreator Litt Dear (DR)
Comment Written 29-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2022
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Thank you.
