fiery dragon
eight words or less poem contest9 total reviews
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
Ooooh, so much adventure, happening here, and very little words to work with nicely done!
Very cool post!
Good luck to you my friend
-Kerry
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2023
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Ooooh, so much adventure, happening here, and very little words to work with nicely done!
Very cool post!
Good luck to you my friend
-Kerry
Comment Written 27-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2023
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Thanks Kerry.
So pleased with your enthusiasm for this post
Comment from Evelyn Hopkins
Cool poem! I like the imagery and figurative language for the 8 words or less poem. And the picture is pretty cool too! Have a good day and good luck!
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2023
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Cool poem! I like the imagery and figurative language for the 8 words or less poem. And the picture is pretty cool too! Have a good day and good luck!
Comment Written 25-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2023
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Thanks Evelyn for your compliments on this contest entry. My typical poem is 5/7/5 syllable lines. I typically use FanArt for my illustrations that pair with my FS posts.
Mark
Comment from Ricky1024
"Fiery Dragon" was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and Flowed well with no Grammar issues.
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Thanks for sharing this and good luck with your contest entry.
Doctor Ricky
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2023
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"Fiery Dragon" was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and Flowed well with no Grammar issues.
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Thanks for sharing this and good luck with your contest entry.
Doctor Ricky
Comment Written 25-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2023
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Thanks Dr. Ricky for all those compliments. Pleased you enjoyed my contest entry.
Mark
Comment from tempeste
Ciao Marco!
Your poem speak of topics I cherish.
I love mythology and the names of Roman gods differ from those of Greece.
The god of fire was Vulcan and he lived and forged metals in the depths of Mount Etna, one of our most loved volcanoes. She is very active, fiery indeed!
I love the myth of dragons ( last December also I watched The Hobbit ). My favorite dragon film is Dragonheart ( 1996) .
That said:
Your poem is a melting pot of what I adore most.
And you put your creative twist to it.
Love the erotic take!
Your artwork choice is beautifully .
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2022
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Ciao Marco!
Your poem speak of topics I cherish.
I love mythology and the names of Roman gods differ from those of Greece.
The god of fire was Vulcan and he lived and forged metals in the depths of Mount Etna, one of our most loved volcanoes. She is very active, fiery indeed!
I love the myth of dragons ( last December also I watched The Hobbit ). My favorite dragon film is Dragonheart ( 1996) .
That said:
Your poem is a melting pot of what I adore most.
And you put your creative twist to it.
Love the erotic take!
Your artwork choice is beautifully .
Comment Written 06-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2022
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THANK YOU Tempeste for your review and your take on this post. You may have visited the Pompei site; I have not.
Mark
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Yes when I was 12 . I should go back now , I would appreciate it more.
Just yesterday I heard on national news about a new discovery
Here is the link in English.
https://www.theguardian.com/world/2022/aug/06/discoveries-in-pomeiis-reveal-lives-of-lower-and-middle-classes
Notte!
Comment from LovnPeace
Great picture. Loved the visual of the burning ass. Good submission. Now to blah blah blah enough words to pass muster with the counter. Blessings, Barbara
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2022
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Great picture. Loved the visual of the burning ass. Good submission. Now to blah blah blah enough words to pass muster with the counter. Blessings, Barbara
Comment Written 06-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2022
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Thanks for your review Barbara!
Pleased my short poem passed muster with you (-;
Mark
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Love the smile. New way for me :). TY
Comment from kahpot
Your words alone took me to an erupting volcano as I know they exist, then your notes made me think I read this one correctly, very well written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2022
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Your words alone took me to an erupting volcano as I know they exist, then your notes made me think I read this one correctly, very well written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 05-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2022
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Thank you for your interpretations! I appreciate your best wishes for this entry.
Mark
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
the ancient Roman god of fire
Excellent entry for the 8 Words or Less Poem prompt contest.
Good words count and connection between lines with great presentation and imagery. It flows well with descriptive words that paint a clear mental picture of Vulcan God of fire.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy Blue Rose
The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid. Atticus
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2022
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the ancient Roman god of fire
Excellent entry for the 8 Words or Less Poem prompt contest.
Good words count and connection between lines with great presentation and imagery. It flows well with descriptive words that paint a clear mental picture of Vulcan God of fire.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy Blue Rose
The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid. Atticus
Comment Written 05-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2022
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Thanks Gypsy!
Even when I pen fewer syllables than my typical 5-7-5, you are supportive of my efforts.
Mark
Comment from karenina
Words and image fit together perfectly, Mark. I guess you needed that warning? I don't know, it's all in the eye of the beholder I suppose! Hot lava and volcano seemed like the perfect suggestion! This one's a committee decision, right? It's intriguing!
Karenina
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2022
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Words and image fit together perfectly, Mark. I guess you needed that warning? I don't know, it's all in the eye of the beholder I suppose! Hot lava and volcano seemed like the perfect suggestion! This one's a committee decision, right? It's intriguing!
Karenina
Comment Written 05-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2022
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Thanks Karenina!
I always look forward to your reviews. Some may not find this post so risqué that a warning was necessary. I intended the innuendo! I really like the FanArt illustration that pairs with my few words.
Mark
Mark
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Better safe than sorry!
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Nice job! Not sure which came first the image or your poem - but they fit together like a glove. Excellent description especially with so few words. A creative take on the image.
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2022
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Nice job! Not sure which came first the image or your poem - but they fit together like a glove. Excellent description especially with so few words. A creative take on the image.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2022
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Michael,
Thanks for your peek at my short style poem. I found the image after I penned the poem. I try to use FanArt for all my posts.
Mark
