Comment from kahpot

Excellent

I think there might be a bit of Ned in Pippy, no wonder the English language is so difficult, I have always wondered why if a letter is silent why is it there, another very humorous read, very well done****kahpot

 Comment Written 01-Aug-2022

---

reply by the author on 01-Aug-2022

Thanks, kahpot

Comment from royowen

Excellent

I love this p, it starts off with the silent "B" discussion, leading nowhere, then an alliteration contest begins with it really revealing how clever the author really is, a wonderful post Bill, very cjlever, well done, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 30-Jul-2022

---

reply by the author on 30-Jul-2022

Thanks, Roy, for the kind review. Bill

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

Well, someone ought to pass them the Pepto, Bill. What a gross
albeit funny in a weird way script. You did a good job with the
rules of script writing as I understand them. I think, no, I know
I will skip attending any of these contests.
Thanks for sharing though, Jan

 Comment Written 29-Jul-2022

---

reply by the author on 29-Jul-2022

Thanks, Jan

Comment from sunnilicious

Excellent

A pie eating contest... This was completely original. I liked the names. I enjoyed the story. Well thought out. Clearly written. "I'm still hungry"... funny. Nice work :)

 Comment Written 27-Jul-2022

---

reply by the author on 27-Jul-2022

Thanks for giving this a look.

Comment from Ric Myworld

Excellent

It's usually pretty easy to figure out where people come up with their ideas and why they write things the way they do - and then, there is you. LOL. It's always fun. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 27-Jul-2022

---

reply by the author on 27-Jul-2022

The important factor is to set up the scene then improvise all that follows.

Comment from BethShelby

Excellent

This made me smile in an extremely disgusting way. You sure manage to create some really dumbee characters. I think food eating contests should be outlawed. Even fictional ones.

 Comment Written 27-Jul-2022

---

reply by the author on 27-Jul-2022

Certainly this one. : )

Comment from nomi338

Excellent

Thank you very much. I was just getting ready to start my late night meal. Now I am not sure if I will be able to eat anything after this gruesome ordeal you have just subjected me to. Boy I tell you, Marines, can't live with them and you will not live without them.

 Comment Written 27-Jul-2022

---

reply by the author on 27-Jul-2022

Marines are not known for their pie-eating stories.

Comment from Jay Squires

Excellent

Another bevy of weird characters "explode" on the scene. In fact, instead of a pie eating contest, I thought it was going to be an IQ contest with the sole judge of who was the smartest being ... say it with me! NED !

LOL, sometimes your mind scares me, Bill!

Jay

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2022

---

reply by the author on 27-Jul-2022

Now this would have been the pie-eating contest to watch, Jay.

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Lol! I guess you and I were on the same wavelength as I was just writing about "climb" and "plumber' but I didn't use "dumb." And well, I was writing about a pie-eating contest either. Hope someone called the ambulance and that everyone had their Covid shots!

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2022

---

reply by the author on 27-Jul-2022

Pippy likely had acid reflux extremis. It is gut-wrenching.

Comment from Jasmine Girl

Excellent

Haha. I'm not sure what's going on here. But it's colorful, funny and the picture is a good one. I think you've made the pie ingredients talking themselves. You made them come alive.

Well done.

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2022

---

reply by the author on 27-Jul-2022

Maybe that IS what happened here. Wow!