Random Rhyme and Petty Prose
Viewing comments for Chapter 13 "Five Pies "a collection of phenomenally mundane work.
10 total reviews
Comment from kahpot
I think there might be a bit of Ned in Pippy, no wonder the English language is so difficult, I have always wondered why if a letter is silent why is it there, another very humorous read, very well done****kahpot
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2022
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I think there might be a bit of Ned in Pippy, no wonder the English language is so difficult, I have always wondered why if a letter is silent why is it there, another very humorous read, very well done****kahpot
Comment Written 01-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2022
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Thanks, kahpot
Comment from royowen
I love this p, it starts off with the silent "B" discussion, leading nowhere, then an alliteration contest begins with it really revealing how clever the author really is, a wonderful post Bill, very cjlever, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2022
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I love this p, it starts off with the silent "B" discussion, leading nowhere, then an alliteration contest begins with it really revealing how clever the author really is, a wonderful post Bill, very cjlever, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 30-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2022
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Thanks, Roy, for the kind review. Bill
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Well, someone ought to pass them the Pepto, Bill. What a gross
albeit funny in a weird way script. You did a good job with the
rules of script writing as I understand them. I think, no, I know
I will skip attending any of these contests.
Thanks for sharing though, Jan
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2022
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Well, someone ought to pass them the Pepto, Bill. What a gross
albeit funny in a weird way script. You did a good job with the
rules of script writing as I understand them. I think, no, I know
I will skip attending any of these contests.
Thanks for sharing though, Jan
Comment Written 29-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2022
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Thanks, Jan
Comment from sunnilicious
A pie eating contest... This was completely original. I liked the names. I enjoyed the story. Well thought out. Clearly written. "I'm still hungry"... funny. Nice work :)
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2022
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A pie eating contest... This was completely original. I liked the names. I enjoyed the story. Well thought out. Clearly written. "I'm still hungry"... funny. Nice work :)
Comment Written 27-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2022
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Thanks for giving this a look.
Comment from Ric Myworld
It's usually pretty easy to figure out where people come up with their ideas and why they write things the way they do - and then, there is you. LOL. It's always fun. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2022
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It's usually pretty easy to figure out where people come up with their ideas and why they write things the way they do - and then, there is you. LOL. It's always fun. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2022
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The important factor is to set up the scene then improvise all that follows.
Comment from BethShelby
This made me smile in an extremely disgusting way. You sure manage to create some really dumbee characters. I think food eating contests should be outlawed. Even fictional ones.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2022
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This made me smile in an extremely disgusting way. You sure manage to create some really dumbee characters. I think food eating contests should be outlawed. Even fictional ones.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2022
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Certainly this one. : )
Comment from nomi338
Thank you very much. I was just getting ready to start my late night meal. Now I am not sure if I will be able to eat anything after this gruesome ordeal you have just subjected me to. Boy I tell you, Marines, can't live with them and you will not live without them.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2022
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Thank you very much. I was just getting ready to start my late night meal. Now I am not sure if I will be able to eat anything after this gruesome ordeal you have just subjected me to. Boy I tell you, Marines, can't live with them and you will not live without them.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2022
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Marines are not known for their pie-eating stories.
Comment from Jay Squires
Another bevy of weird characters "explode" on the scene. In fact, instead of a pie eating contest, I thought it was going to be an IQ contest with the sole judge of who was the smartest being ... say it with me! NED !
LOL, sometimes your mind scares me, Bill!
Jay
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2022
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Another bevy of weird characters "explode" on the scene. In fact, instead of a pie eating contest, I thought it was going to be an IQ contest with the sole judge of who was the smartest being ... say it with me! NED !
LOL, sometimes your mind scares me, Bill!
Jay
Comment Written 26-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2022
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Now this would have been the pie-eating contest to watch, Jay.
Comment from lyenochka
Lol! I guess you and I were on the same wavelength as I was just writing about "climb" and "plumber' but I didn't use "dumb." And well, I was writing about a pie-eating contest either. Hope someone called the ambulance and that everyone had their Covid shots!
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2022
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Lol! I guess you and I were on the same wavelength as I was just writing about "climb" and "plumber' but I didn't use "dumb." And well, I was writing about a pie-eating contest either. Hope someone called the ambulance and that everyone had their Covid shots!
Comment Written 26-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2022
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Pippy likely had acid reflux extremis. It is gut-wrenching.
Comment from Jasmine Girl
Haha. I'm not sure what's going on here. But it's colorful, funny and the picture is a good one. I think you've made the pie ingredients talking themselves. You made them come alive.
Well done.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2022
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Haha. I'm not sure what's going on here. But it's colorful, funny and the picture is a good one. I think you've made the pie ingredients talking themselves. You made them come alive.
Well done.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2022
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Maybe that IS what happened here. Wow!
