Comment from country ranch writer

Excellent

7/28/2022------5:10 pm.
Sometimes we almost without our loved one.
Sometimes we fell the spirit come to check onus.
Sometime the spirit stays and lingers a while watching us sleep.
Sometimes we feel the hand of God telling us everything will be alright and that he is happy serving God.

 Comment Written 28-Jul-2022

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reply by the author on 29-Jul-2022

Thanks so very much for your review and time country ranch writer.
Doctor Ricky

Comment from the13thpoet

Excellent

Hello again Ricky1024 I hope you are enjoying your day. Came across another one of your poems that I enjoyed. I loved the format of this one, how you used "sometimes" and the depth of your message. Good job!

 Comment Written 28-Jul-2022

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reply by the author on 29-Jul-2022

Thanks and It's always nice to see.
See that we can entertain through the positive Clarity.
Positive clarity and the gifts.
Gifts given to us through our intellect from God!
Doctor Ricky 1024
"Still Preaching the Choir here at Fanstory"

Comment from Fleedleflump

Excellent

You speak eloquently of those moments when life is silent, and the mind drifts in a reverie to those past times and past selves, and it's filled with the bittersweet combination of pain and beauty that defines life.

Mike

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2022

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reply by the author on 29-Jul-2022

Thanks Micheal.
Words are patterned after "The Syllables of Life"
Doctor Ricky