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Every aspect of life is colored by MS.
2 total reviews
Comment from
the13thpoet
Hello fellow poet. Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed well within the rules of the writing prompt. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2023
Thank you very much. Sometimes it's hard to visualize the tremendous damage, multiple sclerosis does to one somehow this phone came more easily. I am fortunate to have a good husband and son.
Comment from
Fleedleflump
You do a remarkable job of conveying not just the symptoms but how they affect you and how you in turn respond to them. This was a powerful piece, appropriately desolatory but also tinted with hope and humour.
Mike
Comment Written 26-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2023
Thank you very much. I'm working on another problem about it now and it's hard to miss all the things that have gone wrong with it. A good thing s that have gone right are great though!
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