Truthfulness
A major reason our country is divided is because of lies.5 total reviews
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a good acrostic entry. The poem has a strong and clear message. The font is a large and easily read size. It would be good if the first letters were red, like those damn red Trump hats. Bold is okay, but red would make more impact. This would make the acrostic words more prominent. It would be obvious it is an acrostic poem. Good luck!
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2022
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This is a good acrostic entry. The poem has a strong and clear message. The font is a large and easily read size. It would be good if the first letters were red, like those damn red Trump hats. Bold is okay, but red would make more impact. This would make the acrostic words more prominent. It would be obvious it is an acrostic poem. Good luck!
Comment Written 27-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2022
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Thanks for your read and review. I like your suggestion of red. I will edit.
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You are welcome. Glad you like the suggestion.
Comment from Mary Vigasin
I have to say this was refreshing and different from most of the comments I have seen about the political landscape.
I have been reading 'A Warning' by anonymous; it is terrifying about bending and twisting of the truth to destroy institutions and reputations.
Well-written and stated.
Best wishes,
Mary
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2022
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I have to say this was refreshing and different from most of the comments I have seen about the political landscape.
I have been reading 'A Warning' by anonymous; it is terrifying about bending and twisting of the truth to destroy institutions and reputations.
Well-written and stated.
Best wishes,
Mary
Comment Written 26-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2022
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Thank you for the read and the review. Appreciated, and that is the truth.
Comment from lyenochka
I agree with all you say in your poem and that picture is quite accurate. The part that makes me grieve the most is that using the power of deceptive social media, some very good people were misled.
Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2022
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I agree with all you say in your poem and that picture is quite accurate. The part that makes me grieve the most is that using the power of deceptive social media, some very good people were misled.
Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 26-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2022
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Thanks for the read and the feedback. I love the research that can be done on computers, but social media leaves much to be desired.
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello fellow poet a good day to you, I hope this finds you well. I liked your acrostic Poem contest entry, you executed it well. Good job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2022
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Hello fellow poet a good day to you, I hope this finds you well. I liked your acrostic Poem contest entry, you executed it well. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2022
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Thank you for the read and the positive feedback.
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
I like this poem because it makes the reader consider the question. My personal opinion is that all politicians are liars. This is because they seek to please all of the people of the time. So their truth shifts according to their audience. This used to work reasonably, but with modern immediate and extensive communication networks they are caught in the interstices of their lies. Kate xx
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2022
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I like this poem because it makes the reader consider the question. My personal opinion is that all politicians are liars. This is because they seek to please all of the people of the time. So their truth shifts according to their audience. This used to work reasonably, but with modern immediate and extensive communication networks they are caught in the interstices of their lies. Kate xx
Comment Written 25-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2022
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Those are the exact words of my grandfather when I asked him why he didn't vote. Thanks for the read and the feedback. Appreciated.
