Wild Horses Roam
Blended Rhyming Poem10 total reviews
Comment from GARY MACLEAN
Freedom at its rawest and best. I have never seen such a sight, in person but I have seen it on television and in movies. Raw power unleashed. Beautiful.
Well said.
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Freedom at its rawest and best. I have never seen such a sight, in person but I have seen it on television and in movies. Raw power unleashed. Beautiful.
Well said.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2022
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Comment from Ric Myworld
As I often say, when it comes to poetry, I wouldn't know a sonnet from sorbet. But there are times with poem like yours that even a simple mind like mine can appreciate a post. Thanks for sharing.
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As I often say, when it comes to poetry, I wouldn't know a sonnet from sorbet. But there are times with poem like yours that even a simple mind like mine can appreciate a post. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2022
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Comment from Erika Seshadri
I enjoyed this poem immensely! I love horses and could picture the movement of this beautiful stallion and herd throughout. The Man From Snowy River was one of my favorite movies when I was younger, and it amazes me how much the original poem inspired the movie. :)
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I enjoyed this poem immensely! I love horses and could picture the movement of this beautiful stallion and herd throughout. The Man From Snowy River was one of my favorite movies when I was younger, and it amazes me how much the original poem inspired the movie. :)
Comment Written 27-Jul-2022
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Comment from Tom Horonzy
Yes, I like what was written but do not know if it meets the requirements of the challenging contest. I read and re-read and could not quite get comfortable with what it was we were being asked to do.
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Yes, I like what was written but do not know if it meets the requirements of the challenging contest. I read and re-read and could not quite get comfortable with what it was we were being asked to do.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2022
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Comment from Wendy G
I enjoyed your poem as well as the memories it brings to me, being Australian. However I think you had to actually include four lines from the poem within your poem and build your other lines around them. It would be a complex task. I wish you success with your entry. It's a great stand-alone piece.
Wendy
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I enjoyed your poem as well as the memories it brings to me, being Australian. However I think you had to actually include four lines from the poem within your poem and build your other lines around them. It would be a complex task. I wish you success with your entry. It's a great stand-alone piece.
Wendy
Comment Written 27-Jul-2022
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Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Wild Horses Roam, combines this piece from the Paterson poem and adds some color to localize and epitomize the iconic scene of the talented rider and horse whisperer.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2022
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This poem, Wild Horses Roam, combines this piece from the Paterson poem and adds some color to localize and epitomize the iconic scene of the talented rider and horse whisperer.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2022
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Comment from Sally Law
I don't know why your poem loaded as prose either. Beautifully written nonetheless. Your poetry talent shines here. Love The Man from Snowy River theme.
Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sally :))
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2022
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I don't know why your poem loaded as prose either. Beautifully written nonetheless. Your poetry talent shines here. Love The Man from Snowy River theme.
Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sally :))
Comment Written 25-Jul-2022
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Comment from Jay Squires
I don't understand what the contest creator had in mind when he created the format for this poem. Your poem is about a horse, but the other "Famous Poet's" poem is about the "man from Snowy River." I'm having trouble connecting the two. It's probably my bad. Good luck, though, with the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2022
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I don't understand what the contest creator had in mind when he created the format for this poem. Your poem is about a horse, but the other "Famous Poet's" poem is about the "man from Snowy River." I'm having trouble connecting the two. It's probably my bad. Good luck, though, with the contest.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2022
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Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
The concept of this form of poetry is interesting. I would have preffered to see the two poems more indissociable, but I am well aware that would be a difficult task. I liked your 'unpredictable' rhyming scheme. It seemed to match a shying horse somehow. Kate xx
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The concept of this form of poetry is interesting. I would have preffered to see the two poems more indissociable, but I am well aware that would be a difficult task. I liked your 'unpredictable' rhyming scheme. It seemed to match a shying horse somehow. Kate xx
Comment Written 25-Jul-2022
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Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job with your contest entry, Magic Dragon.
Your rhymes worked well, the storyline flowed smoothly
with great imagery. I could see this as I read.
Best wishes in the contest, Jan
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2022
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You did a great job with your contest entry, Magic Dragon.
Your rhymes worked well, the storyline flowed smoothly
with great imagery. I could see this as I read.
Best wishes in the contest, Jan
Comment Written 25-Jul-2022
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