Random Rhyme and Petty Prose
Viewing comments for Chapter 11 "Next"a collection of phenomenally mundane work.
16 total reviews
Comment from Mary Vigasin
Very clever indeed. Good commentary on texting and the Internet. Often texting is far more quicker than our brain and what we put out there will haunt us forever.
Best wishes,
Mary
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2022
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Very clever indeed. Good commentary on texting and the Internet. Often texting is far more quicker than our brain and what we put out there will haunt us forever.
Best wishes,
Mary
Comment Written 30-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2022
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Thanks, Mary, for the great review. Bill
Comment from sunnilicious
Driving and tenting is as bad drinking and driving. It's a good poem. I wouldn't edit it, but tell you to add a disclaimer. Especially because the artwork choice instigates a direction or idea. Otherwise, good work :)
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2022
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Driving and tenting is as bad drinking and driving. It's a good poem. I wouldn't edit it, but tell you to add a disclaimer. Especially because the artwork choice instigates a direction or idea. Otherwise, good work :)
Comment Written 27-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2022
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Thanks, sunnilicious
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
I think I know what you mean. What we put on the internet lives with us forever. Sadly, it is hexed with sex. And it will not go away because everything on the internet lives longer than the one who has posted it. Very perceptive of you.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2022
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I think I know what you mean. What we put on the internet lives with us forever. Sadly, it is hexed with sex. And it will not go away because everything on the internet lives longer than the one who has posted it. Very perceptive of you.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2022
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Thank you, Carol. Back at you for perceptiveness. Bill
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This is an interesting commentary on the current state of
many countries today, Bill. I enjoyed reading your unique poem.
I liked the way you formatted the lines--they read at a quickened
pace. The rhymes were great-well chosen for their meaning.
The poem itself seemed to focus on a state of confusion with
some of the practices of today.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2022
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This is an interesting commentary on the current state of
many countries today, Bill. I enjoyed reading your unique poem.
I liked the way you formatted the lines--they read at a quickened
pace. The rhymes were great-well chosen for their meaning.
The poem itself seemed to focus on a state of confusion with
some of the practices of today.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
Comment Written 25-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2022
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Thanks, Jan
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A poignant write about the progress of technology and how we spread information quickly and the now soon moved the past much more quickly than it used to, being connected can sometimes be a curse, a poignant and clever write Bill, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2022
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A poignant write about the progress of technology and how we spread information quickly and the now soon moved the past much more quickly than it used to, being connected can sometimes be a curse, a poignant and clever write Bill, love Dolly x
Comment Written 25-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2022
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Thank you, Dolly, for the great review. Bill
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Good artwork, Bill.
-You have some good thoughts
interspersed with interesting rhymes,
forming a whole unit.
-Each part creates a good image
in the reader's mind about the
state of the world.
-It does make it seem like the world
is passing us by, and maybe that was the intent.
-Very good concluding lines, too.
-A saw where people wanted a name for this,
but I don't think it needs on; it is just
your thoughts about how you see things.
-Well done!
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2022
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-Good artwork, Bill.
-You have some good thoughts
interspersed with interesting rhymes,
forming a whole unit.
-Each part creates a good image
in the reader's mind about the
state of the world.
-It does make it seem like the world
is passing us by, and maybe that was the intent.
-Very good concluding lines, too.
-A saw where people wanted a name for this,
but I don't think it needs on; it is just
your thoughts about how you see things.
-Well done!
Comment Written 25-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2022
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Thank you, Pam. It came together fast.
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You are welcome, Bill.
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This is a fun poem. I tried reading it at different speeds, and it made me smile especially as I went faster. But I am confused. Why have you classed it as a story? Kate xx
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2022
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This is a fun poem. I tried reading it at different speeds, and it made me smile especially as I went faster. But I am confused. Why have you classed it as a story? Kate xx
Comment Written 25-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2022
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It is part of an ad hoc assembly of random pieces in this collection. I assume the program lists it as a book chapter. I will look into it.
Comment from Gert sherwood
poem
your chapter in the book Random Rhyme and Petty Prose
Next
Bill Schott my what an excellent rhyming thoughts from you
Smiles to the fromat yes it great You should give your new format a Name.
Gert
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2022
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your chapter in the book Random Rhyme and Petty Prose
Next
Bill Schott my what an excellent rhyming thoughts from you
Smiles to the fromat yes it great You should give your new format a Name.
Gert
Comment Written 24-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2022
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Thanks, Gert
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You are most welcome Bill Scott
Gert
Comment from Ric Myworld
Life goes on, which is good. The past is gone, never to come back. But I guess we'd all like to mosey back in time a little and catch up on what we might have missed. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2022
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Life goes on, which is good. The past is gone, never to come back. But I guess we'd all like to mosey back in time a little and catch up on what we might have missed. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2022
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Thanks, Ric
Comment from lyenochka
This was brilliant and I think you created a new poetic form in the process but we have to make sure we choose end words with lots of rhymes. Your words give us a feeling of moving along in life at the speed of texting but real life is often missed.
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2022
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This was brilliant and I think you created a new poetic form in the process but we have to make sure we choose end words with lots of rhymes. Your words give us a feeling of moving along in life at the speed of texting but real life is often missed.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2022
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Thank you, Helen. Gee, what to call it?
