My Letter to Negative People
My Pet Peeve; Such a waste of time in our short life36 total reviews
Comment from GARY MACLEAN
Always the caring listener. Always the understanding shoulder. You have a heart for everyone, and it shows in everything you write. You give sound, effective advice that could just improve someone's life, for themselves let alone those around them.
Such an easy read, very rhythmic and bouncy. Great job.
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2022
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Always the caring listener. Always the understanding shoulder. You have a heart for everyone, and it shows in everything you write. You give sound, effective advice that could just improve someone's life, for themselves let alone those around them.
Such an easy read, very rhythmic and bouncy. Great job.
Comment Written 02-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2022
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Thanks so much Gary! You are so kind and I love how you see the good in people, as you are quite the opposite of what I write about here. And as an optimist we are on the same page. So thank you my very dear friend for the awesome review and words.
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
Debi,
Wow! This poem hits home personally for me. I have been the victim of someone else's negativity--we all have. And it's still terrible.
Perfect rhyme. Perfect message.
Good luck with this one!
Cindy
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2022
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Debi,
Wow! This poem hits home personally for me. I have been the victim of someone else's negativity--we all have. And it's still terrible.
Perfect rhyme. Perfect message.
Good luck with this one!
Cindy
Comment Written 02-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2022
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You are right Cindy, but you do not have to deal with it. It took me years to find the strength to walk away and say to yourself, this is a problem with them, not me. Don't let this person or people make a target out of you. It is usually someone who is supposed to love us the most dearly and then they gain power when they see the weakness that it causes. Decide what you will and will not put up with, firmly tell them, leave and do whatever you have to do to take care of yourself. We may not even be speaking of the same thing. But I printed this letter off and put it on my fridge as a warning that in my house there will be much, joy, happiness and mostly God lives here. For my health, I have even boycotted the News and done whatever it takes to feel safe from the source of such negativity and harsh comments. Please know if you ever want to talk, you can always pm me anytime. Thanks Cindy and please take care of yourself!
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Debi, thank you so much for your genuine concern. My problem is not with a family member. I live alone with my dog. But there still is some intimidation from outside sources. I can?t explain right now. But that?s ok. Your response really helped me.
I could use a prayer.
Blessings, Debi.
Cindy
Thank you for addressing this!
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Already done Sweetie! You are special to me and I just wanted to make sure you were ok. My prayers will continue. Message me anytime.
Comment from Regina Elliott
This great write deserves 6
stars, unfortunately dear Debi,
I ran out of them yesterday.
I agree wholeheartedly with
your feelings about some
miserable people. Bad attitudes can affect negative
people's health and make
those around them feel bad
too. I try to see silver linings
as much as possible. This
is a strong contender for the
contest. Best wishes my friend.
* I don't have a computer, so
I can't post photos presently.
I work strictly from my
smartphone. Blessings ~
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2022
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This great write deserves 6
stars, unfortunately dear Debi,
I ran out of them yesterday.
I agree wholeheartedly with
your feelings about some
miserable people. Bad attitudes can affect negative
people's health and make
those around them feel bad
too. I try to see silver linings
as much as possible. This
is a strong contender for the
contest. Best wishes my friend.
* I don't have a computer, so
I can't post photos presently.
I work strictly from my
smartphone. Blessings ~
Comment Written 27-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2022
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You are so very sweet my lovely Regina. You make me smile every I even think of you as you gave me such a blessing and honor with your little poem. And the fact that our views are so much alike, yet we try to stay on the positive side. So thank you for this lovely review and comments. And your virtual stars mean as much to me as the real ones my friend. So thank you again!!!t
I understand about your not being able to send a picture for the contest.
It wasn't mandatory and just a suggestion.
Comment from Nic
It's a clever piece! I'm assuming the hypocrisy of the poem's narrator was intentional, right? The shots that the narrator takes at the hypothetical "you" of the poem--questioning the aptitude of their parents, calling them unattractive, and insinuating that their life is horrible--are really funny when the message is don't take shots at others! Since it is a letter and you start with a salutation, I do wish you had a valediction. This might be a good place to make clear whether or not we should read the poem as satire or as a straight letter against negativity.
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reply by the author on 26-Jul-2022
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It's a clever piece! I'm assuming the hypocrisy of the poem's narrator was intentional, right? The shots that the narrator takes at the hypothetical "you" of the poem--questioning the aptitude of their parents, calling them unattractive, and insinuating that their life is horrible--are really funny when the message is don't take shots at others! Since it is a letter and you start with a salutation, I do wish you had a valediction. This might be a good place to make clear whether or not we should read the poem as satire or as a straight letter against negativity.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2022
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Nic, you have insulted some of the best writers on this site and even gave the best one here a bad review. I am not sure what it is you are trying to do, but you obviously have no knowledge of writing. Unless you want to be muted by everyone here, I would suggest treading a little softer until you learn the ropes and stop trying to make enemies from people who have talent and not just doing a little couple words on a script. Learn some respect for others. This poem here was about my pet peeve, which must mean that you couldn't have read the contest form on this either. It doesn't take a very bright mind to figure out that something as creating a letter to actually call out your pet peeve is creative, and you obviously have a chip on your shoulder and need to sit back and learn for a while before trying to review stuff you have no idea about.
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I'm sorry. I didn't mean to be insulting, and I'm not sure how I was disrespectful. Is a four not a good score? It says "good" when I select it. I saw that it was about pet peeves but aren't we all (or at least many of us) guilty of the very things that peeve us the most? I don't see how it being about pet peeves means you couldn't have been satirical. Wasn't your narrator being negative towards the "negative people" to which the letter was written?
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I do have to ask you how old you are and how long have you been writing and reviewing professionally?
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I'm not sure why you have to ask that or what my age or how long I've been reviewing has to do with anything. I'm going to respectfully decline to answer since I, too, have asked some questions but have not yet received answers to them.
Comment from Anne Johnston
Your poem is well written and a good entry for the Pet Peeve Contest. Good advice for all of us, it is so easy to be negative instead of positive. I am way behind on here and trying to catch up a bit today.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2022
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Your poem is well written and a good entry for the Pet Peeve Contest. Good advice for all of us, it is so easy to be negative instead of positive. I am way behind on here and trying to catch up a bit today.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2022
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Thanks Anne for this kind review as well as the last one. I appreciate your kind words too, as it truly is my pet peeve and cannot understand how anyone could possibly treat another so badly. And the worst are the abusers of children and wives. it feels good that I have had a few people say that if gave them a chance to look at themselves a little closer. Isn't that the greatest reward of writings like this? Thanks again my lovely friend!
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You are welcome, Debi
Comment from Wendy G
Great poem, very relevant and timely. So many seem to whinge and complain about the way things are (especially in the US) but I wonder how many are actually actively trying to improve the situation in whatever ways they can, rather than just apportioning blame to others. Best wishes for the contest.
Wendy
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2022
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Great poem, very relevant and timely. So many seem to whinge and complain about the way things are (especially in the US) but I wonder how many are actually actively trying to improve the situation in whatever ways they can, rather than just apportioning blame to others. Best wishes for the contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 26-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2022
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Thanks so much Wendy. Y'know that is one area where people should complain, but only if they are trying to do something to improve it. My husband and I signed every paper and tried to round up others to help overturn Roe v Wade. We took the steps we had been advised to do to expose some corrupt people here and are actively donating and supporting to Christianity organizations to help people help change things without violence. It's just that it's hard to make a difference when you are still immobile, but so many only know how to only complain.
Thanks Wendy for your lovely review and comments! I always love hearing from you. My dear dear.
Comment from Pearl Edwards
This is a good one Debi. You do come across people that only see the negative in life. I was recently told older people are just waiting to die, I was amazed that she felt like that at 76. Good luck in the contest. Cheers
Valda
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2022
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This is a good one Debi. You do come across people that only see the negative in life. I was recently told older people are just waiting to die, I was amazed that she felt like that at 76. Good luck in the contest. Cheers
Valda
Comment Written 26-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2022
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Thanks Valda,! Oh my 76 is still young. That maybe a case where there's nobody in her life that shows them love, but you get what you give. That hurts me to hear that because a couple weeks ago in the hospital I almost died. All my vitals crashed and when they couldn't get them up, and they had to call Code blue. All I remember is that all these people were working on me and all I wanted to do was sleep thru it. It also affected all my bloodwork (lost a lot of blood during surgery too) so they did three total blood transfusions. My point is I fought through the whole time and still fighting, but my faith and family helps that. Thanks for the lovely review and comments my friend!
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Well done fighting through. Life is worth fighting for.
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😘
Comment from Raul1
This is a brave poem you have written and I did enjoy reading it. I think that your message is great and most people should give in to this advice! Exceptional work! I am giving you six stars for a phenomenal job!
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2022
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This is a brave poem you have written and I did enjoy reading it. I think that your message is great and most people should give in to this advice! Exceptional work! I am giving you six stars for a phenomenal job!
Comment Written 25-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2022
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Raul, how very kind of you. It doesn't surprise me that you feel so strongly about also wanting to be treated with kindness and respect. You too are a soft soul with a big heart and you are a very special friend. Thank you for the kind words and the gracious six stars my friend.
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You're welcome!
Comment from Boogienights
This is terrific. You are so right, negative feelings hurt others but they also hurt you as well. It does no good for anyone. Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest. :)
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2022
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This is terrific. You are so right, negative feelings hurt others but they also hurt you as well. It does no good for anyone. Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest. :)
Comment Written 25-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2022
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Thank you much your very kind review and comments. Being human, it's hard to stay positive all the time, but it sure makes for a happier life!
Thanks again my dear friend
Comment from Paul McFarland
Very nice letter, Debi. Let's throw away all the rules and laws that we have to live under today and replace them with just one law. That law would be "The Golden Rule".
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2022
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Very nice letter, Debi. Let's throw away all the rules and laws that we have to live under today and replace them with just one law. That law would be "The Golden Rule".
Comment Written 25-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2022
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Thank you so much Paul. I appreciate your kind review and words so very much. You are an awesome friend!