Morning Mist
Flowers an impressionist view when covered by mist.3 total reviews
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Beautiful words you chose, and they create in my mind exactly what you've depicted with the art you chose to accentuate them. I like this entry a LOT. I'm not done reading all the entries, but this is now high up on my list!! Good luck.
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2022
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Beautiful words you chose, and they create in my mind exactly what you've depicted with the art you chose to accentuate them. I like this entry a LOT. I'm not done reading all the entries, but this is now high up on my list!! Good luck.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2022
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Thank you for taking the time to read and for the encouraging feedback.
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My total pleasure.
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
Thankfully, a mist covers those plants daily. They stand there for everyone to view and enlighten. Those are beautiful. And the color is breathtaking.
Among the mist, they are great to look at. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022
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Thankfully, a mist covers those plants daily. They stand there for everyone to view and enlighten. Those are beautiful. And the color is breathtaking.
Among the mist, they are great to look at. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022
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Thank you for your read and encouraging feedback.
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You aRe welcome.
Comment from Fleedleflump
Interesting use of the word 'shroud' which obviously has many connotations (and potentially counterpoints 'veil' in the previous line). You've done a great job of laying out a description that's also pregnant with implication and potential interpretation - always a good approach to these very short forms!
Mike
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022
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Interesting use of the word 'shroud' which obviously has many connotations (and potentially counterpoints 'veil' in the previous line). You've done a great job of laying out a description that's also pregnant with implication and potential interpretation - always a good approach to these very short forms!
Mike
Comment Written 23-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022
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I saw "veil" as translucent, yet still covering the flowers. I guess it could be read differently. Thanks for your feedback, always interesting and appreciated.
