Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

I'm imagining St. Nicholas with his "smiling, snow-flecked beard" in July. It is a cooling (due to the snow) and yet warming (endearing for what he represents) picture. I notice that there are no verbs in your poem. Is that intentional? Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2022

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reply by the author on 24-Jul-2022

Thank you so very much,
lyenochka. I really appreciate
the 5 star review. The lack of
verbs was just a coincidence.
I hope you're having a lovely
Sunday. Many blessings to
you. ~

Comment from Fleedleflump

Excellent

I love the snow-flecked beard. That's a lovely little bit of description and brings in Christmas and winter themes without needing to be explicit. Nice pairing of flight/night too - speeding up the flow. I like it :-)

Mike

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2022

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reply by the author on 24-Jul-2022

Thank you, Mike. You're a
thoughtful fellow poet. I
really appreciate the 5 star
review. Sunday blessings ~

Comment from Raul1

Excellent

This poem meets the requirements for the contest. The sentences flow with clarity. Excellent work! I like it. No grammatical errors. Good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2022

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reply by the author on 24-Jul-2022

Thank you so much, Raul!
Have a blessed Sunday. ~

reply by Raul1 on 24-Jul-2022

You're welcome and same to you too!