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penguin marriage

5-7-5 contest entry (matched pair of penguins)

5 total reviews 
Comment from Mary Vigasin
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Before I leave the voting page for 5-7-5 entries. I have to tell you I thought your entry was delightful and a fun read.
I wish you well in the contest.
Best wishes,
Mary

 Comment Written 24-Jul-2022

reply by the author on 24-Jul-2022
    Thanks Mary for that vote of confidence. Pleased you liked it!
Comment from Wendy G
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I like the alliteration in your lines, and it is true that they seem to wear formal attire, making the pairing a suitable wedding theme. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy

 Comment Written 24-Jul-2022

reply by the author on 24-Jul-2022
    Wendy,

    The Disney movie Penguins tells of a romantic couple. Let?s assume they had a marriage ceremony with their tuxedoed friends in attendance. LOL
Comment from Tina Crute
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Cute! What I like about this...
The picture looks playful and draws the reader into it.
The alliteration of pair and penguins, wedding and waddle
The familiar theme of being excited to walk down the aisle
Good job with a cute little story in just a few words!
Tina

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2022

reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022
    Tina,

    Apparently, the guests all wore their tuxedo suits! Thanks for your kind remarks for my contest entry.
reply by Tina Crute on 23-Jul-2022
    haha...that's true. I didn't think of that! That makes it even cuter:)
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
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They have cheap wedding attire, lol. They are dressed daily for weddings daily. I like the picture and the story. Penguins are cute. They are amazing. I do not understand how they stand the cold all year long. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2022

reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022
    Carolyn,

    Thanks for your kind remarks. Apparently, all their guests wore tuxedos.
reply by Carolyn Dooley on 23-Jul-2022
    LOL. They are all ready to get married.
    You are welcome.
Comment from jessizero
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What a cute little sentiment! And you told it in seventeen syllables. That's great. The picture works well with the poem about penguins getting married. Thanks for sharing!

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2022

reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022
    Jess,

    We can only imagine the number of tuxedoed guests for this marriage (-;