Comment from Erika Seshadri

Excellent

Hello, this is an excellent entry for the Free Verse Poem contest, with the ageless plagues we know as abuse of power and corruption.

The last line really delivers a punch.

Best of luck in the contest. Feel free to visit my portfolio if you ever get a moment. I love finding new readers.

Have a great day,
Erika

 Comment Written 30-Jul-2022

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reply by the author on 03-Aug-2022

Hi Erika,
Thank you for the thoughtful feedback! I am glad you enjoyed my poem!

Comment from Raul1

Excellent

This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It is a well written poem. Excellent work! No mistakes found in your poetry. I like your poem. Good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2022

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reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022

Thanks for another thoughtful review!

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

I will not assume that I completely understood this wonderful read, I related it to the so-called rulers of today with their arrogance and self-importance, an excellent read and free verse poem, best wishes for your contest****kahpot

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2022

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reply by the author on 22-Jul-2022

Thanks, I appreciate your thoughtful feedback.
That's what I was going for!