The Alphabet's Costume Party
A children's story for some learning and entertainment3 total reviews
Comment from GARY MACLEAN
Great job. Great concept for a children's book. A little confusing at times but you seemed to keep all the letters straight, so it worked.
Great story.
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2022
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Great job. Great concept for a children's book. A little confusing at times but you seemed to keep all the letters straight, so it worked.
Great story.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2022
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Hi Gary! I'm glad you enjoyed my story. Thank you for the excellent rating! The letters weren't necessarily meant to stay in order because the story was about a party, and people mingle at parties, even children. Thank you for taking the time to read my story and give me feedback. I appreciate it so much. Have a blessed weekend!
Comment from Tina Crute
I enjoyed this. This is a fun way to teach the alphabet, conversation-style. The bright presentation makes it look like the party that is going on. I wish you well in the contest!
Tina
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2022
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I enjoyed this. This is a fun way to teach the alphabet, conversation-style. The bright presentation makes it look like the party that is going on. I wish you well in the contest!
Tina
Comment Written 23-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2022
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Hi Tina Crute! Thank you for the feedback and the kind comments. I'm so glad you enjoyed my story. Have a blessed week!
Comment from lancellot
Ha, I have to say this is very good. I may be an old man now, but this is a story I can see myself reading to future grandkids. I really liked how you kept it cohesive and natural all the way from A to Z. Bravo!
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2022
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Ha, I have to say this is very good. I may be an old man now, but this is a story I can see myself reading to future grandkids. I really liked how you kept it cohesive and natural all the way from A to Z. Bravo!
Comment Written 23-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2022
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Hi lancellot! Thank you for the six-star rating! I'm so honored. Also, thank you for the feedback. I'm glad you enjoyed my story, and it makes me feel so good that you would read this story to your grandkids. That comment made my day and it means that I wrote the story right. Have a blessed week!
