"The Gift of Life 2003"
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2 total reviews
Comment from Fleedleflump
I love that this is not about death, but rather transitioning I to another stage of life. The vibrant positivity work beautifully.
Mike
Spag note:
'Life has taken such a horrid of Toll' - the 'of' is superfluous. Should be: 'Life has taken such a horrid Toll'
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022
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I love that this is not about death, but rather transitioning I to another stage of life. The vibrant positivity work beautifully.
Mike
Spag note:
'Life has taken such a horrid of Toll' - the 'of' is superfluous. Should be: 'Life has taken such a horrid Toll'
Comment Written 22-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022
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The more I write the easier it seems to get in the more beautiful!
Thanks Mike.
Doctor Ricky
Comment from Theodore McDowell
The beginning of your poem grabbed my attention in a major way: Slip within, leave behind your shell of Sin.
A story of freedom and breaking free from the layers of sin or the cocoon of sin. A very thought-provoking poem.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2022
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The beginning of your poem grabbed my attention in a major way: Slip within, leave behind your shell of Sin.
A story of freedom and breaking free from the layers of sin or the cocoon of sin. A very thought-provoking poem.
Comment Written 22-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2022
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Thanks again Theodore.
Doctor Ricky.
