"The Gift of Life 2003"
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Comment from Theodore McDowell
Nice poem about navigating the stream of consciousness that is temporal and ever-changing as you travel down the stream. Well-written in your trademark style. Good job.
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2022
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Nice poem about navigating the stream of consciousness that is temporal and ever-changing as you travel down the stream. Well-written in your trademark style. Good job.
Comment Written 22-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2022
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The object of writing this was to compare both States conscious and unconscious and do it in a special way.
Thanks
Doctor Ricky
Comment from prettybluebirds
I'm impressed with how this story is written from Jason's perspective. I do believe there is a form of awareness that goes on forever. I mean, where has who we are gone? I can't imagine ceasing to exist. Wonderful writing.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2022
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I'm impressed with how this story is written from Jason's perspective. I do believe there is a form of awareness that goes on forever. I mean, where has who we are gone? I can't imagine ceasing to exist. Wonderful writing.
Comment Written 22-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2022
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Occasionally I will give Jason credit because even though he was only a junior
He was beginning to become a writer.
Thanks
Doctor Ricky
