Acrostic (Momhappy - Birthday)
A Bookend Acrostic16 total reviews
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
Such a wonderful verse honoring and celebrating the beauty that is your mom.
This is well conceived and realized.
The photo adds a layer of dimension to your writing, furthering the connection between poet and reader.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022
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Such a wonderful verse honoring and celebrating the beauty that is your mom.
This is well conceived and realized.
The photo adds a layer of dimension to your writing, furthering the connection between poet and reader.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022
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Thank you for your wonderful and understanding comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from jenintorre
I really enjoyed reading this acrostic poem and love the photo. Your mum must be very proud of you.
Nice one. Best wishes. Jen.
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022
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I really enjoyed reading this acrostic poem and love the photo. Your mum must be very proud of you.
Nice one. Best wishes. Jen.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Raul1
Our families are special in the sense that they care so much about us. It's beautifully written. I have enjoyed reading it. Excellent work! Good job! Thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022
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Our families are special in the sense that they care so much about us. It's beautifully written. I have enjoyed reading it. Excellent work! Good job! Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 23-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022
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Thank you my friend, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
What a beautiful gift straight from your heart to your Mom's,
kahpot. I enjoyed the double acrostic that you are so adept
at writing. Your presentation is excellent. You mom looks so
serene and proud of her trio of boys. The picture is one for
framing for all four in it. Your words are descriptive and create
great imagery of your beloved mom. You did a super job of
formatting the words so the Happy Birthday stands out.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2022
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What a beautiful gift straight from your heart to your Mom's,
kahpot. I enjoyed the double acrostic that you are so adept
at writing. Your presentation is excellent. You mom looks so
serene and proud of her trio of boys. The picture is one for
framing for all four in it. Your words are descriptive and create
great imagery of your beloved mom. You did a super job of
formatting the words so the Happy Birthday stands out.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
Comment Written 22-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2022
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Thank you very much, Jan, we try to make our MOM proud as we are proud of her, your wonderful comments are very much appreciated****kahpot PS. this weeks challenge really gets the mind turning
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Wow! Your Mother looks amazing! The cake looks delicious and the boys look proud of their Mum. What a beautiful acrostic to pay tribute to her, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2022
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Wow! Your Mother looks amazing! The cake looks delicious and the boys look proud of their Mum. What a beautiful acrostic to pay tribute to her, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 22-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2022
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Thank you very much, yes, we are proud to be her boys, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from country ranch writer
7/22/2022------6:13 pm
Really special birthday wishes to your mom she looks good for her age!she has a lot of love still to give you all. Her cake looks lovely and I hope she had a wonderful day! God bless her.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2022
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7/22/2022------6:13 pm
Really special birthday wishes to your mom she looks good for her age!she has a lot of love still to give you all. Her cake looks lovely and I hope she had a wonderful day! God bless her.
Comment Written 22-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2022
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Thank you for your excellent comments and review, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
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Comment from LateBloomer
Hello Kahpot, you did a really great job on this poem. A double ended acrostic is not an easy feat. As I read your poem, I could feel the love that you have for your Mom. I especially liked:
my mother's love, seen never to ebb
(That's a mom for you, and your mom is very special.)
I have presentation suggestions for you to test out--double space your poem. Double spacing might or might not be pleasing to the eye--only you can decide. Also, if you should decide to double space the poem or not, try moving your poem down two lines from the top and add to lines at the end of the poem. A third suggestion is to use an upper case letter at the beginning of each line. All these suggestions are presentation suggestions. It may or may not improve presentation. That's for you to decide. Also, make these changes in off times so you don't miss any reviews.
This is a birthday poem that any mother would be proud to receive, and I know that your mom will absolutely love it as she loves you and your brothers. My last request is for your to identify yourself in the poem. Kahpot, please step forward. This is a poem that made me smile. LateBloomer
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2022
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Hello Kahpot, you did a really great job on this poem. A double ended acrostic is not an easy feat. As I read your poem, I could feel the love that you have for your Mom. I especially liked:
my mother's love, seen never to ebb
(That's a mom for you, and your mom is very special.)
I have presentation suggestions for you to test out--double space your poem. Double spacing might or might not be pleasing to the eye--only you can decide. Also, if you should decide to double space the poem or not, try moving your poem down two lines from the top and add to lines at the end of the poem. A third suggestion is to use an upper case letter at the beginning of each line. All these suggestions are presentation suggestions. It may or may not improve presentation. That's for you to decide. Also, make these changes in off times so you don't miss any reviews.
This is a birthday poem that any mother would be proud to receive, and I know that your mom will absolutely love it as she loves you and your brothers. My last request is for your to identify yourself in the poem. Kahpot, please step forward. This is a poem that made me smile. LateBloomer
Comment Written 22-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2022
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Dear LateBloomer, I have read and understood your wonderful suggestions and applied them all, I am overwhelmed with the result, and I thank you so very much, I am the Lad on the right of photo in the red-you know the good-looking one Ha! Ha! as always so very much appreciated, reviews like this are what I look for ****kahpot
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OK, Kahpot. I have to go and look at the poem. I'm glad the suggestions worked for you. You can never tell--it's a trial and error thing. I'm going to look. Byeeeeeeee LB
Comment from John Ciarmello
First, I'd like to extend birthday wishes to your mom on her Ninetieth. I loved the poem, kahpot, but I'm not privy to all the different types of poetry, so I will leave that to the experts. Your words are beautiful! A nice tribute to your mom.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2022
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First, I'd like to extend birthday wishes to your mom on her Ninetieth. I loved the poem, kahpot, but I'm not privy to all the different types of poetry, so I will leave that to the experts. Your words are beautiful! A nice tribute to your mom.
Comment Written 22-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2022
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Thank you JohnC, for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are sweet, kind, heartfelt, caring, loving, descriptive
and creative. Thank you for the author's notes - beautiful words! The
poem flows and connects well. The artwork is awesome! May you all have a great day! To your Mom: Have a wonderful Birthday!.....Maria
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2022
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The author's words are sweet, kind, heartfelt, caring, loving, descriptive
and creative. Thank you for the author's notes - beautiful words! The
poem flows and connects well. The artwork is awesome! May you all have a great day! To your Mom: Have a wonderful Birthday!.....Maria
Comment Written 22-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2022
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
She looks like a proud mom. That is a nice cake. It was nice to write this special poem for her. And I would not change a word. It is a sweet tribute to obviously a great woman. I wish my two sons would do something like this for me. Thank you.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2022
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She looks like a proud mom. That is a nice cake. It was nice to write this special poem for her. And I would not change a word. It is a sweet tribute to obviously a great woman. I wish my two sons would do something like this for me. Thank you.
Comment Written 22-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2022
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Thank you so very much, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
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You are welcome.
