Persephone
Demeter mourns the loss of her daughter, Persephone.2 total reviews
Comment from Raul1
I think that there is a cycle of life in the galaxy and the universe starts again. It will repeat itself. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Well written. Well done. Thank you for sharing! Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022
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I think that there is a cycle of life in the galaxy and the universe starts again. It will repeat itself. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Well written. Well done. Thank you for sharing! Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 22-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022
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Thank you! I appreciate the feedback and your thoughts on the universe.
Phew! I can read something multiple times and still not see the mistakes. My brain just sees what it wants!
Comment from Fleedleflump
There's a sage beauty to this, detailing the journey of a classical Tragedy through poetic eyes. Great vocabulary and it never feels constrained by the acrostic form.
Mike
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2022
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There's a sage beauty to this, detailing the journey of a classical Tragedy through poetic eyes. Great vocabulary and it never feels constrained by the acrostic form.
Mike
Comment Written 22-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2022
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Thanks Mike, I appreciate your feedback! I?m glad it didn?t feel constrained to you. It took a bit of finagling to get it to flow. 😂
