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"The Gift of Life 2003"

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Comment from lyenochka
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Thank you for sharing, Dr. Ricky. I agree that death is not the end because the Lord Jesus has conquered sin and death for us. So death is only the beginning of eternal life. We will all be reunited then. You will be reunited with Jason.

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2022


reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022
    Well thank you for your beautiful comment and review.
    Today is a hard day for me.
    Yes, for I do have to do what I just did here.
    Yes, and in front of a crowd of Latter-Day Saint Priest's and family members.
    Yes for we recently had a passing of one of our church members.
    Doctor Ricky
reply by lyenochka on 23-Jul-2022
    Cass was asking about you so you might want to message her that you are okay. Sorry for the hard times. But this is our temporary home. God will help us through it.
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022
    Since my eviction from Harbor View Apartments on July 3rd, 2022
    I've been happily living in another town with my good friend Joseph Vigils.
    Temporarily displaced housing which is affordable is mostly nonexistent here in South Jersey.
    More on that later ..
    Ricky
reply by lyenochka on 23-Jul-2022
    Hope you can find a good and safe place soon! 🙏
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2022
Comment from AbbyeK7
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Good writing. You indicate that the person involved is not alive on earth, but living in another dimension. I like this. You give hope to the grieving.
Maybe the family will be comforted by God and your words. Keep going.

 Comment Written 21-Jul-2022


reply by the author on 22-Jul-2022
    The person temporarily is deceased because his organs which is my son Jason exist in others.
    I wouldn't go as far as saying it's another dimension and he was unless you want to consider afterlife or Heaven that.
    Thanks for the review.
    Doctor Ricky
Comment from country ranch writer
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7/20/2022-------1:24 pm

Yes there is life after death by those giving of their live to orpthers so they may go on living. Life is precious pass it on to others sign the donor card to save lives so your loved one can live on through others.

 Comment Written 21-Jul-2022


reply by the author on 30-Jul-2022
    'Organ-Tissue Donations' Yes, and information have become one of my little side specialties.
    I have it on 3 bicycles as I ride and I hand out the necessary items that go along with it.
    Thanks,
    Doctor Ricky
Comment from Fleedleflump
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I love that you write not from assumption or from a philosophical standpoint, but from your personal connection to things and the realities you perceive as a result of your own understanding. It has a power all its own.

Mike

 Comment Written 21-Jul-2022


reply by the author on 30-Jul-2022
    When I first started writing almost 20 years ago.
    I started with grieving poetry.
    "A Father's Grieving Heartache"
    And, then followed up with love poems and everything else.
    Thanks,
    Doctor Ricky1024