Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

This is a beautiful presentation, Tina.
I love the picture and the idea of your
mother's spirit sailing to Heaven. Great
job with the rules.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes, Jan

 Comment Written 21-Jul-2022

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reply by the author on 21-Jul-2022

Jan,
Thanks a bunch!

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I liked the idea of a 'final breath gently sailing a spirit home'. I enjoyed reading and what to wish you the very best luck with the contest.

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 Comment Written 21-Jul-2022

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reply by the author on 21-Jul-2022

Barbara, thank you for reading and giving me your thoughts!

Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)

Excellent

This sounds sad. But I presume you had valid reasons to be thankful. So I rejoice with you that she has gone on to a better place. Good luck in the contest. Kate xx

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 Comment Written 21-Jul-2022

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reply by the author on 21-Jul-2022

It was sad, but joy comes from knowing she is with her Savior. I only feel gratefulness:)
Thank you for this review. I was trying not to make it sad.
Tina

reply by Katherine M. (k-11) on 21-Jul-2022

It sounded sad to me coz I'm living through it this year. It probably wouldn't to a lot of others. K

reply by the author on 21-Jul-2022

That is understandable. I am so sorry! I went through anger and all the stages. I was just a teen. I am thankful for all she taught me, mostly about Jesus. It stuck,lol. Sending hugs and prayers,
Tina