History of a Nation (On Repeat)
Different each time...22 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the 8 Words or Less Poem contest.
A beautiful poem about the present state of our country is true. We are in danger of losing our democracy.
I enjoyed reading it. I also enjoyed your unique style and well chosen words.
Good presentation Your writing flows naturally and it's easy to understand.
Good luck in the contest.
Well done.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason".- Novalis
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022
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Excellent entry for the 8 Words or Less Poem contest.
A beautiful poem about the present state of our country is true. We are in danger of losing our democracy.
I enjoyed reading it. I also enjoyed your unique style and well chosen words.
Good presentation Your writing flows naturally and it's easy to understand.
Good luck in the contest.
Well done.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason".- Novalis
Comment Written 22-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022
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Thank you for your kind words.
Comment from K. Lang-Slattery
Thank you for this very moving and timely poem. You have said so much in only 8 words! You used the image of frying fabric beautifully. The final line is very telling. I appreciate your thoughts.
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022
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Thank you for this very moving and timely poem. You have said so much in only 8 words! You used the image of frying fabric beautifully. The final line is very telling. I appreciate your thoughts.
Comment Written 22-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022
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Thank you for reading.
Comment from jenintorre
Firstly I love your artwork and presentation. Your words match so perfectly and are so true. I wish you lots of luck in the competition. Jen.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2022
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Firstly I love your artwork and presentation. Your words match so perfectly and are so true. I wish you lots of luck in the competition. Jen.
Comment Written 22-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2022
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Thank you for your kind words.
Comment from jake cosmos aller
hmm like this poem that could be about almost any of the political battles that are tearing about our society these days. I love ending lines the best as it sums up the mood nicely.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2022
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hmm like this poem that could be about almost any of the political battles that are tearing about our society these days. I love ending lines the best as it sums up the mood nicely.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2022
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Thanks for reading!
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are creative and thought provoking. I found the poem
to express deeply the repeat of history in distinct ways. I like the words
this author chose to describe this. They were unique and meaningful.
The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is awesome!
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2022
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The author's words are creative and thought provoking. I found the poem
to express deeply the repeat of history in distinct ways. I like the words
this author chose to describe this. They were unique and meaningful.
The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is awesome!
Comment Written 21-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2022
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Thanks for reading!
Comment from royowen
What does one do when a country is polarised, when guns are more important the children's lives, when your enemy is your neighbour, so much so, that one needs a gun to protect yourself? When politicians find it impossible to please the people? Disillusionment rules the nation, why doesn't one do something? It starts with me. Blessings good work, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2022
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What does one do when a country is polarised, when guns are more important the children's lives, when your enemy is your neighbour, so much so, that one needs a gun to protect yourself? When politicians find it impossible to please the people? Disillusionment rules the nation, why doesn't one do something? It starts with me. Blessings good work, blessings Roy
Comment Written 21-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2022
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Thanks for reading!
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Most welcome
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Every once in a while, a short piece of poetry can make sense. Faith nailed it well with the picture and phrase. Well done, and best of luck in this contest.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2022
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Every once in a while, a short piece of poetry can make sense. Faith nailed it well with the picture and phrase. Well done, and best of luck in this contest.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2022
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Thank you for your kind words.
Comment from jp88
I enjoyed your poem. I love the intensity that can be conveyed in those four short lines. The image is powerful, and I find quite a good analogy to life. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2022
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I enjoyed your poem. I love the intensity that can be conveyed in those four short lines. The image is powerful, and I find quite a good analogy to life. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 21-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2022
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Thank you for your kind words.
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
This is a sensational summation of our nation and our lives in just eight words. I'm always impressed when someone can say so much with so little. Well done!
I liked that you used an image with a tapestry needle, which ties it in with your words normally used with sewing.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2022
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This is a sensational summation of our nation and our lives in just eight words. I'm always impressed when someone can say so much with so little. Well done!
I liked that you used an image with a tapestry needle, which ties it in with your words normally used with sewing.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2022
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Thank you for your kind words.
Comment from Sally Law
Faith, this is not only truth in poetry, but cold water to the sleeping, and, hopefully, causes many to wake up and take notice. History DOES repeat itself if we don't learn from it and grow.
Marvelous offering, and contest winner in my eyes.
Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sally :))
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2022
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Faith, this is not only truth in poetry, but cold water to the sleeping, and, hopefully, causes many to wake up and take notice. History DOES repeat itself if we don't learn from it and grow.
Marvelous offering, and contest winner in my eyes.
Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sally :))
Comment Written 21-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2022
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Wow, thank you for your kind words.
