History of a Nation (On Repeat)
Different each time...22 total reviews
Comment from jessizero
You did such a wonderful job weaving a poem with these eight words as threads. Thank you so much for sharing your poem here, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2022
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You did such a wonderful job weaving a poem with these eight words as threads. Thank you so much for sharing your poem here, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2022
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Thank you for your kind words.
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
This poem touches on the incredible divide that is tearing our country apart .
I appreciate the topic as it is extremely relevant.
The message left is a strong one that I hope your readers will receive.
Good luck in contest.
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022
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This poem touches on the incredible divide that is tearing our country apart .
I appreciate the topic as it is extremely relevant.
The message left is a strong one that I hope your readers will receive.
Good luck in contest.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022
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Thank you for reading!
Comment from Jesse James Doty
I don't see how this is history on repeat.
I don't see our country as unraveling so much as I see it in need of lay leaders and civil rights leaders to help bring us all together once again! What I see is division and folks who are always crying for old leaders who are best to go to jail or even better to prison!
Thank you for sharing and for letting me express my opinion.
Jesse
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I don't see how this is history on repeat.
I don't see our country as unraveling so much as I see it in need of lay leaders and civil rights leaders to help bring us all together once again! What I see is division and folks who are always crying for old leaders who are best to go to jail or even better to prison!
Thank you for sharing and for letting me express my opinion.
Jesse
Comment Written 23-Jul-2022
Comment from lyenochka
A very profound poem in just eight words so elegantly formatted! Each brief line of two words has a fabric reference (woven, tapestry, threads, unraveling). It does feel like the fabric our nation is unraveling.
Best wishes in the contest!
And welcome to Fanstory, I see you started recently!
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022
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A very profound poem in just eight words so elegantly formatted! Each brief line of two words has a fabric reference (woven, tapestry, threads, unraveling). It does feel like the fabric our nation is unraveling.
Best wishes in the contest!
And welcome to Fanstory, I see you started recently!
Comment Written 23-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022
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Thank you for reading!
Comment from karenina
Welcome! I see you joined in June... Love that you've entered contests with every post.
It's a fun way to get to know your way around the site, and you've already had a third place win!
This...
This could be the breakthrough winner, Faith.
Sometimes less is more!
Perfect choice of image, perfect words...
Anyone with a pulse will know what you are saying here!
Six worthy... Alas, I'm out...
Impressive!
Karenina
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022
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Welcome! I see you joined in June... Love that you've entered contests with every post.
It's a fun way to get to know your way around the site, and you've already had a third place win!
This...
This could be the breakthrough winner, Faith.
Sometimes less is more!
Perfect choice of image, perfect words...
Anyone with a pulse will know what you are saying here!
Six worthy... Alas, I'm out...
Impressive!
Karenina
Comment Written 23-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022
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Thank you for your kind words.
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So welcome!
:)
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a clear and powerful message. The font size makes for easy reading, I would bold the first line to send the message of strength and consider making the last word in italics to mimic that word of being fragile/different. The visual is perfect. Good luck!
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022
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This is a clear and powerful message. The font size makes for easy reading, I would bold the first line to send the message of strength and consider making the last word in italics to mimic that word of being fragile/different. The visual is perfect. Good luck!
Comment Written 23-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022
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Thank you for reading.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Raul1
I have enjoyed reading your beautiful poem. It is clear and concise. The sentences flow with clarity. Excellent work! No mistakes found. Good job! Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022
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I have enjoyed reading your beautiful poem. It is clear and concise. The sentences flow with clarity. Excellent work! No mistakes found. Good job! Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 23-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022
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Thank you for reading.
Comment from NANCY V. FORREST
You managed to tell a complete and sad story in eight words. Hopefully there will be one on knitting up to follow some day soon. The needle and thread at least offer hope.
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022
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You managed to tell a complete and sad story in eight words. Hopefully there will be one on knitting up to follow some day soon. The needle and thread at least offer hope.
Comment Written 22-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022
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Thank you for reading.
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:-)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Some lives are unravelling just now because the pandemic which has left many penniless, homeless and without support. A poignant write Faith, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022
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Some lives are unravelling just now because the pandemic which has left many penniless, homeless and without support. A poignant write Faith, love Dolly x
Comment Written 22-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022
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Thank you for reading.
Comment from Tina Crute
This poem looks messy and it's effective. Nice touch. Things are pulling loose from the shape they used to be in, for sure. A timely and important entry.
Tina
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022
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This poem looks messy and it's effective. Nice touch. Things are pulling loose from the shape they used to be in, for sure. A timely and important entry.
Tina
Comment Written 22-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022
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Thank you for reading.
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It was unique! Welcome!
