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Comment from Fei Ma
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

I also like this 5/7/5 Haiku. The syllables are right, and the writing is creative and proper in both meaning and feeling based on the picture. Such meaning and feeling are poetically put together by words. Another perfect 5/7/5.

 Comment Written 24-Jul-2022

reply by the author on 24-Jul-2022
    Fei Ma, Thank you for the exceptional six stars review. I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem. Hugs.

    Gypsy
    "The poet waits to paint the unsaid." ?Atticus
Comment from Heather Knight
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

This is so visual and the words so beautiful! I love what you have written, but I'm also in awe of your presentation. It matches your poem perfectly.
I'd love to be able to master something, anything, the way you master haiku. x

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2022

reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022
    Heather, thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem, I appreciate the exceptional six stars review and kind words!

    Gypsy xoxox
Comment from harmony13
Excellent
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I found the words describe a scene the author was able to convey in the first two lines of this poem filled with the beauty of nature. The last line says it all! I like the color scheme the author chose. The artwork is awesome! Great poem Gypsy! Hope you are doing well!.....Maria

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2022

reply by the author on 22-Jul-2022
    Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback.

    Gypsy
Comment from jenintorre
Excellent
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This is a really well written Haiku poem.I love the artwork that you've chosen and your beautiful presentation. Best wishes. Jen.

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2022

reply by the author on 22-Jul-2022
    Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback.

    Gypsy
Comment from Pam (respa)
Excellent
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-Very nice artwork and presentation, Gypsy.
-A well written haiku with effective
seasonal and nature imagery.
-You create a good word picture of twilight,
and a peaceful mood with "serene mountains..."
-A good satori line.
-Well done.

 Comment Written 21-Jul-2022

reply by the author on 21-Jul-2022
    Thank you very much, Pam. I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem.

    Gypsy
    "Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
reply by Pam (respa) on 21-Jul-2022
    You are welcome, Gypsy.
Comment from aryr
Excellent
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What a great haiku and a fantastic picture, Gypsy. Your words simply wrapped around the idea and concept of your creation. Very well done, greatly enjoyed. Blessed be n hugs!

 Comment Written 21-Jul-2022

reply by the author on 21-Jul-2022
    Hello, Aryr

    Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback. Blessed be and hugs.

    Gypsy
Comment from Jasmine Girl
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What a nicely constructed presentation. You personified mountain, twilight. They chase each other in the mysterious and multilayered world. It's beauitiful and the nature is.

Well done.

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2022

reply by the author on 21-Jul-2022
    Hello, Lisa,

    Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback.

    Gypsy xoxox
Comment from karenina
Excellent
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Ahhhh. The peaceful quiet use of another day waning into night...

Your haiku settles softly on my heart...

Deep breath, center myself...

All is right with the world!

Karenina

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2022

reply by the author on 20-Jul-2022
    I need to meditate more. (( Sigh )) along with exercise and leave the house.... se la vie

    Thank you, sweetie pie. Have a great evening.

    Where do you live...west coast? East coast? Europe? Australia? Canada? LoL so many choices. I live in pasadena, close to Los Angeles. :)
reply by karenina on 20-Jul-2022
    I live in Western Mass. (But I still think of you as my next door bestie!)
Comment from Gert sherwood
Excellent
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Gypsy Blue your 5/7/5 Haiku Twilight Shadows is great I like how you chased the shadows
Its good to be back so I can read your haiku
Thank you for sharing your haiku

Gert


 Comment Written 20-Jul-2022

reply by the author on 20-Jul-2022
    Good to see you back.

    Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback.

    Gypsy
    "Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason".- Novalis
reply by Gert sherwood on 21-Jul-2022
    Thank you Gypsy Blue
    Yes its great to be back
    Gert
Comment from AP Apgar
Excellent
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I like your poem- good presentation- picture- poem flows very well- smooth progressive picture of of the movement of light -twilight chasing out the remaining light- nice- good picture of location- good job

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2022

reply by the author on 20-Jul-2022
    Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback.

    Gypsy
    "Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason".- Novalis