Dribbles And Drabbles
Viewing comments for Chapter 12 "Bisque"A Collection Of Mini Stories
15 total reviews
Comment from Patricia Hinds
I really enjoyed reading this story. It made me realize that even in tragedy there is good. The accident some how changed people's lives beyond the two people involved. It was truly inspirational and so much was said in just 200 hundred words. Much success to you!
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2022
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I really enjoyed reading this story. It made me realize that even in tragedy there is good. The accident some how changed people's lives beyond the two people involved. It was truly inspirational and so much was said in just 200 hundred words. Much success to you!
Comment Written 28-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2022
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Don't know what I was thinking with my review. I really messed that response up. Disregard, and accept this instead. Much appreciate the review and the sixer. Glad you enjoyed this story.
Comment from jessizero
I don't know why I didn't tell you this before, but this was a wonderful story, as I am sure you know. Thank you so much for sharing this story, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2022
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I don't know why I didn't tell you this before, but this was a wonderful story, as I am sure you know. Thank you so much for sharing this story, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2022
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Glad you enjoyed this story. Appreciate the review.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Wow! What an inspirational story with a positive twist. I enjoyed
reading it. The progression of time and reflection of the past was
interwoven well. I like the two stories taking place at the same time.
Congratulations on your first-place win, Jan
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022
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Wow! What an inspirational story with a positive twist. I enjoyed
reading it. The progression of time and reflection of the past was
interwoven well. I like the two stories taking place at the same time.
Congratulations on your first-place win, Jan
Comment Written 22-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022
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Thanks. Glad you enjoyed this piece. Appreciate the review.
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
Nice job with this piece. One of the better ones I've read and I hope it does well.
Two Singles wrapped another thousand bucks- singles doesn't need the capitalisation.
All the best
GMG
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2022
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Hi there,
Nice job with this piece. One of the better ones I've read and I hope it does well.
Two Singles wrapped another thousand bucks- singles doesn't need the capitalisation.
All the best
GMG
Comment Written 22-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2022
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Appreciate the catch and the review.
Comment from Gunner Lil
Enjoyed this very much. Great ending with a two fisted shock wave. Very nice pay off also.
Would a person being married for thirty-five years be an ancient geezer? Is it "he couldn't care less" or "he could care less". Could he flip the cover or turn the cover?
All in all, a great read.
Good Luck.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2022
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Enjoyed this very much. Great ending with a two fisted shock wave. Very nice pay off also.
Would a person being married for thirty-five years be an ancient geezer? Is it "he couldn't care less" or "he could care less". Could he flip the cover or turn the cover?
All in all, a great read.
Good Luck.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2022
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Appreciate the review.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the 200 Word Flash writing prompt contest.
Random acts of kindness can turn someone's life around. This Flash fictions shows that well.
Good word count and with nice presentation. It flows well with descriptive words that paint a clear mental picture.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2022
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Excellent entry for the 200 Word Flash writing prompt contest.
Random acts of kindness can turn someone's life around. This Flash fictions shows that well.
Good word count and with nice presentation. It flows well with descriptive words that paint a clear mental picture.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
Comment Written 21-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2022
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Appreciate the review.
Comment from Mia Twysted
As another entry in the contest, I protest. This is great. The emotion and feeling that you get when you read the note and then learn her story hits the heart of the reader. I reread it just to feel it again. Amazing what can lead to a change in life.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2022
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As another entry in the contest, I protest. This is great. The emotion and feeling that you get when you read the note and then learn her story hits the heart of the reader. I reread it just to feel it again. Amazing what can lead to a change in life.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2022
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Thanks. Appreciate the review.
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
Author,
Your great story can be interpreted as chance, or divine intervention. Either way it is a nice read and teaches a great lessons.
Good luck in the contest.
Blessings,
Cindy
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2022
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Author,
Your great story can be interpreted as chance, or divine intervention. Either way it is a nice read and teaches a great lessons.
Good luck in the contest.
Blessings,
Cindy
Comment Written 21-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2022
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Appreciate the review.
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Attn: Readers read the author's notes, first for herein I would have been atop of what I read when I read "I picked up my bus tub, but couldn't place him." Good luck
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2022
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Attn: Readers read the author's notes, first for herein I would have been atop of what I read when I read "I picked up my bus tub, but couldn't place him." Good luck
Comment Written 21-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2022
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Appreciate the review.
Comment from Rachelle Allen
You piqued my curiosity from the first sentence, then slowly, methodically, laid out a treasure map for me to following with your flowing style of writing. This felt more like a slow, fascinating unveiling than the usual wham-bam style of flash fiction. So, by the time I arrived at the last word, I felt emotionally spent, rather than assaulted. Absolutely FANTASTIC job!! Wowie zowie! This has "winner winner chicken dinner" written ALLLLL over it! Good luck to you!
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2022
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You piqued my curiosity from the first sentence, then slowly, methodically, laid out a treasure map for me to following with your flowing style of writing. This felt more like a slow, fascinating unveiling than the usual wham-bam style of flash fiction. So, by the time I arrived at the last word, I felt emotionally spent, rather than assaulted. Absolutely FANTASTIC job!! Wowie zowie! This has "winner winner chicken dinner" written ALLLLL over it! Good luck to you!
Comment Written 21-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2022
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Glad you enjoyed this posting. Appreciate the review.