Not Your Mother's Lemonade
A case of be careful of what you wish for.8 total reviews
Comment from Terry Broxson
A very fun story for the contest, and congratulations on the win! I like the creative way you described the camping trip. I do live in Texas and have for all my life, and I can attest those armadillos are fast little devils, Excellent work.
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2022
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A very fun story for the contest, and congratulations on the win! I like the creative way you described the camping trip. I do live in Texas and have for all my life, and I can attest those armadillos are fast little devils, Excellent work.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2022
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Glad a fellow Texan enjoyed my effort. Continued good luck with your own writing.
Comment from Contests
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2022
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 A contest winning entry! A seven star rating from the Contest Committee for posting the winning contest entry. |
Comment Written 30-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2022
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Thank you! I am honored!
Comment from country ranch writer
7;23;2022-------1:18 am.
Nice little camping story with a bit of mystery to it to you reading through to the end. The young's will enjoy reading. Nice done no blood and guts there to upset anyone.Good job my friend.
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022
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7;23;2022-------1:18 am.
Nice little camping story with a bit of mystery to it to you reading through to the end. The young's will enjoy reading. Nice done no blood and guts there to upset anyone.Good job my friend.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022
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Glad you liked it. Written in fun, for fun. I appreciate your kind words and nice rating. Hope all's good with you and your writing.
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Yes, doing what I can
Comment from country ranch writer
7;23;2022-------1:18 am.
Nice little camping story with a bit of mystery to it to you reading through to the end. The young's will enjoy reading. Nice done no blood and guts there to upset anyone.Good job my friend.
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022
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7;23;2022-------1:18 am.
Nice little camping story with a bit of mystery to it to you reading through to the end. The young's will enjoy reading. Nice done no blood and guts there to upset anyone.Good job my friend.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022
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Repeat review.
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Gremlin at work again sirry
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Gremlin at work again sorry
Comment from Ric Myworld
One of those camping trips that wasn't meant to be, just like the ones where they started off with stories about the ghost wanting back his golden arm, so on and . . .. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2022
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One of those camping trips that wasn't meant to be, just like the ones where they started off with stories about the ghost wanting back his golden arm, so on and . . .. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 20-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2022
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Crackling campfire, flaming marshmallows, and strange sounds in the night...all punctuated by a well-worn ghost story. Unbeatable!
Comment from Beejay
I m so pleased I read, Not your Mother's Lemonade.
It certainly held my interest. There were no slow parts and although an easy read, still very entertaining and engrossing. I enjoyed the humour thread throughout your words. Not only did I enjoy it I learned at the same time from your story.
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2022
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I m so pleased I read, Not your Mother's Lemonade.
It certainly held my interest. There were no slow parts and although an easy read, still very entertaining and engrossing. I enjoyed the humour thread throughout your words. Not only did I enjoy it I learned at the same time from your story.
Comment Written 20-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2022
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Glad you enjoyed the story. Thank you for the kind words and nice rating. Good luck with your own writing.
Comment from prettybluebirds
This is a fun and entertaining story; I love it. You have a good imagination to come up with this writing. It is unique and creative. It should do well in the contest. I wish you all the luck in the world. Nice work.
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2022
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This is a fun and entertaining story; I love it. You have a good imagination to come up with this writing. It is unique and creative. It should do well in the contest. I wish you all the luck in the world. Nice work.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2022
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Thank you for such nice words and a fantastic rating. Good luck with your own writings.
Comment from dellsworthpoet
As Bullwinkle might say, "Eenie, Meenie, jelly beany the spirit speaks."
It would seem the Gahn had chosen this family to favor. The piece flows well. The pace is good. The language fits the story. The dialogue is believable. The story stays on point and is open ended.
Thanks for a good read.
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2022
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As Bullwinkle might say, "Eenie, Meenie, jelly beany the spirit speaks."
It would seem the Gahn had chosen this family to favor. The piece flows well. The pace is good. The language fits the story. The dialogue is believable. The story stays on point and is open ended.
Thanks for a good read.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2022
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Thank you for the nice rating and accompanying words. Good luck with your own efforts.
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You are welcome.