The Life of a Poem
Contest Entry2 total reviews
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello fellow poet. Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed well within the rules of the writing prompt, the life of a poem isn't easy or most poets for that matter. Good job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2022
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Hello fellow poet. Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed well within the rules of the writing prompt, the life of a poem isn't easy or most poets for that matter. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 20-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2022
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Thank you!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This is a great contest entry, Mystery Author.
I enjoyed reading it. You described the life
of a poem well. I liked the personification. I
felt like the poem was talking to all poets. Your
words were descriptive and well chosen. Your
whole theme was well thought out.
I believe a bit of revising would make the last
verse more fitting.
May I suggest ~
I have stanzas [ add this/ or verses]
Best wishes in the contest, Jan
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2022
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This is a great contest entry, Mystery Author.
I enjoyed reading it. You described the life
of a poem well. I liked the personification. I
felt like the poem was talking to all poets. Your
words were descriptive and well chosen. Your
whole theme was well thought out.
I believe a bit of revising would make the last
verse more fitting.
May I suggest ~
I have stanzas [ add this/ or verses]
Best wishes in the contest, Jan
Comment Written 19-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2022
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Thank you and for your help! I have fixed the last stanza. The verses flow better.
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last verse
formatted into
may be--not one word
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Okay, I have fixed it. Thank you for your help! Is it better now?
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😊 I would write 'in' as 'into' in last verse.
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Okay, it is done. Thank you for your help!
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😊
