Give us a break!
Take some time out and ...15 total reviews
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
Very timely poem with a great picture. It does seem like mother nature needs to take a rest and give us a break. Here's wishing you the very best of luck in the 5-7-5 contest.
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2022
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Very timely poem with a great picture. It does seem like mother nature needs to take a rest and give us a break. Here's wishing you the very best of luck in the 5-7-5 contest.
Comment Written 18-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2022
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Thank you very much for your kind review and also for your good wishes.
Comment from Raul1
I have enjoyed reading your poetry. I think that Earth does need a rest from all the evil that is going on. Excellent work! No mistakes found. Thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2022
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I have enjoyed reading your poetry. I think that Earth does need a rest from all the evil that is going on. Excellent work! No mistakes found. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 18-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2022
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Thank you Raul. Appreciated.
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are concerning, upsetting, real, descriptive and
creative. Thank you for the author's notes - they speak volumes! The author's words give a strong message. The poem flows and connects well.
The artwork is perfect and goes well with words and theme of this poem.
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2022
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The author's words are concerning, upsetting, real, descriptive and
creative. Thank you for the author's notes - they speak volumes! The author's words give a strong message. The poem flows and connects well.
The artwork is perfect and goes well with words and theme of this poem.
Comment Written 18-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2022
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Thank you Harmony. Greatly appreciated.
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
That is what I say, give up a break. We sure need one. Things are getting really wild. Our governor announced this morning that another county in Michigan is under an emergency for flooding. We need rain, yet it floods. It does not make sense. I wish things would stay equal. That is not going to happen. Thank you for sharing.
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reply by the author on 18-Jul-2022
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That is what I say, give up a break. We sure need one. Things are getting really wild. Our governor announced this morning that another county in Michigan is under an emergency for flooding. We need rain, yet it floods. It does not make sense. I wish things would stay equal. That is not going to happen. Thank you for sharing.
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Comment Written 18-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2022
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Thank you Carolyn. Yes, I understand - we've had three record breaking floods this year, and more rain is on the way!
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You are welcome.
Comment from jessizero
This was a good 5-7-5 poem. You painted a lovely picture with your words. I also enjoyed your author's notes. Thank you for sharing this here, and best wishes to you.
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reply by the author on 18-Jul-2022
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This was a good 5-7-5 poem. You painted a lovely picture with your words. I also enjoyed your author's notes. Thank you for sharing this here, and best wishes to you.
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Comment Written 18-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2022
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Thank you Jessi. Greatly appreciated.
