Balance of Beauty
5-7-5 contest entry2 total reviews
Comment from Fleedleflump
I love how nature always seems to be out-doing itself :-). You do a lovely job of reminding us how beautiful a dawn can be, spreading across the sky like a light-based pat of shiny butter!
Mike
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2022
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I love how nature always seems to be out-doing itself :-). You do a lovely job of reminding us how beautiful a dawn can be, spreading across the sky like a light-based pat of shiny butter!
Mike
Comment Written 18-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2022
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Lol. Thank you for the great review, Mike. I'm glad you liked this little piece.
Comment from Theodore McDowell
Nice poem for the writing prompt. At its core, the haiku is a poem of gratitude for the dawn and the equally compelling gift of sunset and the end of a day. You highlight bookends of grace.
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2022
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Nice poem for the writing prompt. At its core, the haiku is a poem of gratitude for the dawn and the equally compelling gift of sunset and the end of a day. You highlight bookends of grace.
Comment Written 18-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2022
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Thank you for the awesome review, Theodore. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you liked the piece.
