Wind and Water
might of nature16 total reviews
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
Some people have fun, and it is great. It looks like fun. Things could go wrong in a heart beat. Many people have the courage to try anything. They know what they are up against from the start. They take chances. And it is up to the individual. All we can do is stand back and pray. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2022
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Some people have fun, and it is great. It looks like fun. Things could go wrong in a heart beat. Many people have the courage to try anything. They know what they are up against from the start. They take chances. And it is up to the individual. All we can do is stand back and pray. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 18-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2022
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I do agree with your thoughts. I don't have that kind of courage! I turn backwards in the shower, so I don't get my face wet!!! Thanks so much for reading and responding. elaine
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You are welcome.
Comment from Wendy G
Amazing photo to accompany your words about the power of nature! Your words are just right. Wishing you all the best for the contest.
Wendy
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2022
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Amazing photo to accompany your words about the power of nature! Your words are just right. Wishing you all the best for the contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 18-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2022
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Thanks, Wendy, for taking your time to read and respond. It is encouraging. elaine
Comment from rspoet
This is an excellent entry for the 5-7-5 contest
with very good description of the winds and ocean
as the surfer sails across the water.
Nicely done.
God luck in the contest.
Robert
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2022
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This is an excellent entry for the 5-7-5 contest
with very good description of the winds and ocean
as the surfer sails across the water.
Nicely done.
God luck in the contest.
Robert
Comment Written 18-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2022
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Thanks, Robert, for reading and commenting on my work. I appreciate it. elaine
Comment from Mark D. R.
Something I never did and likely never will as a senior LOL
Regardless, your poem captured the thrill of kite surfing in a nicely penned 5-7-5. You chose a good photo to pair with your entry.
P.S. IMHO increasing your font size (consider 22 point in bold type) will improve your presentation value to other FS reviewers.
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2022
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Something I never did and likely never will as a senior LOL
Regardless, your poem captured the thrill of kite surfing in a nicely penned 5-7-5. You chose a good photo to pair with your entry.
P.S. IMHO increasing your font size (consider 22 point in bold type) will improve your presentation value to other FS reviewers.
Comment Written 18-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2022
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Mark, thanks so much for reading and responding. I am 73, live on the gulf coast, but rarely get in the water!! I appreciate your helpful comments. I don't have any idea how to work in the editing feature. I just learned how to center my text. elaine
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello mystery poet a Good day to you, I hope this finds you well. I liked your 5-7-5 Poem contest entry, you executed it well on the syllable count. Good job and good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 24-Jul-2022
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Hello mystery poet a Good day to you, I hope this finds you well. I liked your 5-7-5 Poem contest entry, you executed it well on the syllable count. Good job and good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 18-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2022
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I do appreciate your reading and commenting on my work, again! It is encouraging. elaine
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image and presentation.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Effective imagery paints a good word picture of the scene.
-Good description with "vast churning waters."
-A very good concluding line, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 24-Jul-2022
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-Nice image and presentation.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Effective imagery paints a good word picture of the scene.
-Good description with "vast churning waters."
-A very good concluding line, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 18-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2022
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I appreciate your comments. Thanks for reading and responding. elaine
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You are very welcome.
