"The Gift of Life 2003"
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2 total reviews
Comment from jp88
This was a fun read. The language is engaging and the flow easy to follow. I am not sure, but I think in the line "My Heart tis pounding..." should it be "tis" and not just "is"?
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2022
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This was a fun read. The language is engaging and the flow easy to follow. I am not sure, but I think in the line "My Heart tis pounding..." should it be "tis" and not just "is"?
Comment Written 20-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2022
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I thank you so very much for your time and your review.
Doctor Ricky
Comment from Fleedleflump
I think, on some level, this speaks of us all, desperately sharing what we can, dreaming and communing, seeking to extract maximum value from our thoughts before our bodies take us on the final ride. I loved reading this one - great stuff!
Mike
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2022
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I think, on some level, this speaks of us all, desperately sharing what we can, dreaming and communing, seeking to extract maximum value from our thoughts before our bodies take us on the final ride. I loved reading this one - great stuff!
Mike
Comment Written 18-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2022
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Increased it by one.
Re-Read
Re-Review.
Doctor Ricky
