"Poetry from the Broken Heart"
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Comment from dellsworthpoet
This piece has almost the feeling of a chant or a rosary telling. With the recurring Jesus, Jesus as a refrain before each request. The flow is good. The narrative stays on point. The layout on the page as a poem adds to this feeling. The language is appropriate to the subject.
Thanks for a good read.
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2022
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This piece has almost the feeling of a chant or a rosary telling. With the recurring Jesus, Jesus as a refrain before each request. The flow is good. The narrative stays on point. The layout on the page as a poem adds to this feeling. The language is appropriate to the subject.
Thanks for a good read.
Comment Written 17-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2022
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All right extremely deep religious poetry on Sundays.
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky 1024
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You are welcome.
Comment from kahpot
Wow! this one is definitely heartfelt, and written for the the release of grief, the artwork is wonderful as the words fill the reader with empathy, very well written and presented****kahpot
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2022
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Wow! this one is definitely heartfelt, and written for the the release of grief, the artwork is wonderful as the words fill the reader with empathy, very well written and presented****kahpot
Comment Written 17-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2022
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I felt very spiritual and powerful readiness and I think that helps sometimes?
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky