Not like Other Daddies
A little girl talks about her daddy.14 total reviews
Comment from BeckyMann
Really enjoyed this poem. I loved how you compared the love of the animals. It was a very unique twist, and something I haven't seen before. Best of luck.
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2022
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Really enjoyed this poem. I loved how you compared the love of the animals. It was a very unique twist, and something I haven't seen before. Best of luck.
Comment Written 15-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2022
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Thank you very much for a good review.
Comment from royowen
What a magnificent post! A really good entry in this contest, and one of the best forms for this style of poem are couplets in heptameter, and you've written one of the smoothest, and the most articulate of all, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2022
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What a magnificent post! A really good entry in this contest, and one of the best forms for this style of poem are couplets in heptameter, and you've written one of the smoothest, and the most articulate of all, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 15-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2022
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Thank you for a wonderful review!
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Most welcome
Comment from Raul1
This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It's beautifully written. The sentences flow with clarity. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thank you for sharing!
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reply by the author on 15-Jul-2022
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This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It's beautifully written. The sentences flow with clarity. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thank you for sharing!
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Comment Written 15-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2022
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Thank you very much for a good review. Grammar is my thing, too!
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You're welcome!
Comment from Erika Seshadri
This is a very cute entry for the Children's Rhyming Poem contest and has great cadence and flow. I predict it will do well in the voting booth.
Have a great day,
ERika
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reply by the author on 15-Jul-2022
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This is a very cute entry for the Children's Rhyming Poem contest and has great cadence and flow. I predict it will do well in the voting booth.
Have a great day,
ERika
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Comment Written 15-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2022
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Thank you very much for your review, Erika. I hope you're right.
