Not like Other Daddies
A little girl talks about her daddy.14 total reviews
Comment from mrsmajor
What a delightful poem, so easy to read in your well written rhymed quatrain verses...In so many ways, you
show how much a child is loved, and how much that child loves her Dad..I really liked how you included so many other beings, and yet in the end, the child does love their dad the best. The story brought out the old teacher in me...I know children would love reading your poem...Good luck in the Contest.
Thanks for sharing...Blessings,
Warmly,
Victoria
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2022
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What a delightful poem, so easy to read in your well written rhymed quatrain verses...In so many ways, you
show how much a child is loved, and how much that child loves her Dad..I really liked how you included so many other beings, and yet in the end, the child does love their dad the best. The story brought out the old teacher in me...I know children would love reading your poem...Good luck in the Contest.
Thanks for sharing...Blessings,
Warmly,
Victoria
Comment Written 27-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2022
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Thanks, Victoria, for your lovely review. I did treasure my dad. Blessings to you, too! Verna
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You're quite welcome, it was my pleasure...The poem was a sheer delight...I know my students would have loved it!
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
A beautiful written kids 'poem with a good message. The font size needs to be larger to make it more prominent and easier to read. I would also make the font colorful. This is a poem for kids. Vibrant colors make it more attractive to kids. The background a color other than gray would be good too. The visual is okay. It fits the text. The poem is great, but the presentation could be better. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2022
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A beautiful written kids 'poem with a good message. The font size needs to be larger to make it more prominent and easier to read. I would also make the font colorful. This is a poem for kids. Vibrant colors make it more attractive to kids. The background a color other than gray would be good too. The visual is okay. It fits the text. The poem is great, but the presentation could be better. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 17-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2022
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Thank you for the thoughtful review.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Debi Pick Marquette
I don't know who you are, where you come from, or what you look like; but I know an Awesome poem when I read it. I loved the comparison to the animals and the deep affectionate love between child and daddy and it almost brought me to tears. So hooray for you, as I think I have made my choice but in fairness I must read them all. I just don't know how it can get any better than this! Great job!
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2022
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I don't know who you are, where you come from, or what you look like; but I know an Awesome poem when I read it. I loved the comparison to the animals and the deep affectionate love between child and daddy and it almost brought me to tears. So hooray for you, as I think I have made my choice but in fairness I must read them all. I just don't know how it can get any better than this! Great job!
Comment Written 16-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2022
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Thank you so much for a wonderful review! AND the six!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
This was a beautiful entry for the Children's Rhyming Poem writing prompt contest. The rhyme doesn't seem forced. I'll have to read it to my grandson.
The picture of the presentation are a delight.
I loved your poem's story of about the little girl's love for her dad...aw...so cute.
Well done. Goodluck in the contest.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason".- Novalis
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2022
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This was a beautiful entry for the Children's Rhyming Poem writing prompt contest. The rhyme doesn't seem forced. I'll have to read it to my grandson.
The picture of the presentation are a delight.
I loved your poem's story of about the little girl's love for her dad...aw...so cute.
Well done. Goodluck in the contest.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason".- Novalis
Comment Written 16-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2022
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Thank you for a lovely review.
Comment from BethShelby
I really love this poem. It tell so much about all kind of animal and how they act and then tells about the childs daddy and how he is very best daddy of all. The rhyming is delighful.
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2022
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I really love this poem. It tell so much about all kind of animal and how they act and then tells about the childs daddy and how he is very best daddy of all. The rhyming is delighful.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2022
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Thank you very much for a lovely review.
Comment from dragonpoet
This poem fits the contest well. Its rhyming couplets show the different fathers in nature and shows the characteristics of the best dads.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2022
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This poem fits the contest well. Its rhyming couplets show the different fathers in nature and shows the characteristics of the best dads.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
Comment Written 16-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2022
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Thank you for a great review.
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You?re very welcome.
Joan
Comment from GARY MACLEAN
What dad wouldn't melt if he had a little girl, his daughter, recite this poem to him. I loved the many different comparisons between animal and dad. The child always had a good comeback to support her "Daddy."
Really nice.
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2022
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What dad wouldn't melt if he had a little girl, his daughter, recite this poem to him. I loved the many different comparisons between animal and dad. The child always had a good comeback to support her "Daddy."
Really nice.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2022
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Thanks, Gary, for a great review. And special thanks for the six!
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I very rarely award six-stars for poetry. But this one was exceptional, and it hit a soft spot. Very nice.
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I really appreciate the review and the stars!
Comment from Rachelle Allen
I LOVE this!! I can just imagine a child sitting on either parent's lap and listening to these delightful rhymes that comprise the kind of story that he or she would find easy to understand and be able to draw parallels about in his own life. This would make for just THE most adorable children's book. I bet it's going to do SO well in the contest!! Good luck.
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2022
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I LOVE this!! I can just imagine a child sitting on either parent's lap and listening to these delightful rhymes that comprise the kind of story that he or she would find easy to understand and be able to draw parallels about in his own life. This would make for just THE most adorable children's book. I bet it's going to do SO well in the contest!! Good luck.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2022
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Thank you for the lovely review, along with the wishes for good luck.
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
This is a sweet poem about a child loving her dad. And her dad tells her he loves her. My dad did not show love. My dad was distant. He told me he loved me once, and that was in 1979. Thank you for sharing. When I would go to Alabama from Michgan, he would be in bed. Or get up for a few minutes and go back to bed. He died in 1992. And I forgave him for the things he said to me and the way he treated me on his dead bed.
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2022
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This is a sweet poem about a child loving her dad. And her dad tells her he loves her. My dad did not show love. My dad was distant. He told me he loved me once, and that was in 1979. Thank you for sharing. When I would go to Alabama from Michgan, he would be in bed. Or get up for a few minutes and go back to bed. He died in 1992. And I forgave him for the things he said to me and the way he treated me on his dead bed.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2022
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Thank you for a very good review. I'm sorry your dad did not show love. He was the loser.
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Thank you.
Comment from Wendy G
A beautiful poem! you've written it well informing about the roles of all the animal daddies, but also affirming that the child's father's actions are always the best. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2022
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A beautiful poem! you've written it well informing about the roles of all the animal daddies, but also affirming that the child's father's actions are always the best. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 15-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2022
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Thank you very much for a good review.
