Moving Pictures and Author Notes
Contest entry6 total reviews
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
A cleverly done rewording of a common cliche to fit the FanStory site. Your font is large enough to be easily read. While the visual is beautiful, I don't see how it is related to the rewrite of the cliche. I think you got the prompt rewrite as intended. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2022
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A cleverly done rewording of a common cliche to fit the FanStory site. Your font is large enough to be easily read. While the visual is beautiful, I don't see how it is related to the rewrite of the cliche. I think you got the prompt rewrite as intended. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2022
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The rewrite of the cliche is from 'war' to 'prompt' seeing how everyone reading it knows what it's referring to. Yes, outside the site, none would have a clue what it means but since it's a contest entry on the site I'm fairly certain everyone who uses these tactics to gain advantage knows exactly what the rewrite is meaning. Thank you for the great review, Sandra.
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Exactly, I agree. You are welcome.
Comment from GARY MACLEAN
All's fair... With that being said, the video does indeed play a major part in my reviewing and rating. I liked how I could distinctly see four different environments: wet & soggy, dry & arid, hot & steamy and cool & natural.
Very nice
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2022
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All's fair... With that being said, the video does indeed play a major part in my reviewing and rating. I liked how I could distinctly see four different environments: wet & soggy, dry & arid, hot & steamy and cool & natural.
Very nice
Comment Written 16-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2022
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Yep, these moving pictures have it all. Lol. Thank you for the great review and generous stars, Gary. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Okay, this evokes another cliche: I hope this doesn't give you a target on your back! Not everyone on here has as good a sense of humor as you obviously do. Far too many take themselves a little too seriously.
Good luck with your special-effects entry!!
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2022
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Okay, this evokes another cliche: I hope this doesn't give you a target on your back! Not everyone on here has as good a sense of humor as you obviously do. Far too many take themselves a little too seriously.
Good luck with your special-effects entry!!
Comment Written 16-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2022
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Lol. Thank you for the great review and for throwing the contest, Rachelle. I had fun with it. Yes, way too many people on here don't have any sense of humor. The funny part about that is...that's their problem. Lol. I appreciate the generous stars, R. Thank you again.
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Yes! That's why G-d gave us the ability to shrug.
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Haha. Yep.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Great artwork and nice presentation.
-How were you able to change the provided picture.
-I like your author notes, too.
-I looked at your title again, and I get your point.
-I also like your alternate version!!
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2022
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-Great artwork and nice presentation.
-How were you able to change the provided picture.
-I like your author notes, too.
-I looked at your title again, and I get your point.
-I also like your alternate version!!
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2022
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Hey, Pam, hi. Thank you for the great review. Changing the pic is easy. All you have to do is reedit the piece after you've saved it once, then you can choose to remove it or pick something from your computer. I really appreciate the generous stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. Have a great rest of your weekend.
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You are very welcome, and thanks for sharing about the picture. I did like you entry very much! Have a good day and weekend, too.
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I see by your portfolio you love the violin. Did you happen to check out the accompanying video? She's very talented with it.
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Actually, we are big fans of Lindsey in our house. We saw her Christmas concert a few years ago in Philadelphia. She goes out in the aisles, and went right next to where we were sitting. My favorite song is "Crystallize." I did watch some of your video to refresh my memory. Thanks for mentioning it.
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Wow, awesome.
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I agree!!
Comment from Erika Seshadri
I'm literally laughing out loud at this one. I just saw one of these moving pics in a contest entry and was like, what the heck is going on here?
Well done. We can all relate. I'd call this one a winner, but you never know what's going to happen in that voting booth. ;)
Take care,
Erika
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2022
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I'm literally laughing out loud at this one. I just saw one of these moving pics in a contest entry and was like, what the heck is going on here?
Well done. We can all relate. I'd call this one a winner, but you never know what's going to happen in that voting booth. ;)
Take care,
Erika
Comment Written 15-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2022
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Erika. Yeah, you never know with these people. Lol. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you had a chuckle at this silly piece. Have yourself a great weekend.
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello fellow writer/poet a good day to you. I hope this review finds you well. As a poet/writer it is always interesting to see the different takes on these contest/writing prompts. I think your take is definitely a good one. Good job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2022
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Hello fellow writer/poet a good day to you. I hope this review finds you well. As a poet/writer it is always interesting to see the different takes on these contest/writing prompts. I think your take is definitely a good one. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2022
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Thank you for the great review, 13. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
