One Liners
Contest Entry18 total reviews
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
I don't know the cliche in your one liner. The font size was large enough. The text is actually funny even if I don't know this cliche. . I wish you had used a visual that fit your rewrite better rather than the one offered for the contest. The first monkey alone would be the one that fit your piece best. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2022
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I don't know the cliche in your one liner. The font size was large enough. The text is actually funny even if I don't know this cliche. . I wish you had used a visual that fit your rewrite better rather than the one offered for the contest. The first monkey alone would be the one that fit your piece best. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 17-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2022
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Thank you!
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You are welcome.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
This was a beautiful entry for the Cliche' It Ain't So writing prompt contest.
I loved your poem about one liners men try to pi c k up a woman, so.e are lame.
Well done. Goodluck in the contest.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason".- Novalis
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2022
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This was a beautiful entry for the Cliche' It Ain't So writing prompt contest.
I loved your poem about one liners men try to pi c k up a woman, so.e are lame.
Well done. Goodluck in the contest.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason".- Novalis
Comment Written 16-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2022
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Thank you!
Comment from Wendy G
Absolutely true - they are not needed, yet they can often be fun or insightful. I like your entry for the cliche prompt. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2022
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Absolutely true - they are not needed, yet they can often be fun or insightful. I like your entry for the cliche prompt. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 16-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2022
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Thank you!
Comment from Bill Schott
This one reminds me that a dollar and six cents a day keeps the poetry in play. Cliches are like buttholes. One will last you a lifetime.
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2022
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This one reminds me that a dollar and six cents a day keeps the poetry in play. Cliches are like buttholes. One will last you a lifetime.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2022
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Thank you!
Comment from GARY MACLEAN
I love one-liners. You can be amused, even more so entertained for hours listening to someone throw one-liners. Some of the best yokes are over easy.
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2022
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I love one-liners. You can be amused, even more so entertained for hours listening to someone throw one-liners. Some of the best yokes are over easy.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2022
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Thank you!
Comment from lyenochka
This one made me smile. I guess you mean those one-line poem contests? I think those are super hard to write but I think it's in the tradition of the epigram - those sharp, witty repartees that hints at a bit of wisdom like a proverb. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2022
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This one made me smile. I guess you mean those one-line poem contests? I think those are super hard to write but I think it's in the tradition of the epigram - those sharp, witty repartees that hints at a bit of wisdom like a proverb. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 16-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2022
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Thank you!
Comment from Jesse James Doty
One liners really you still don't need them?
This isn't a cliche and it isn't used in a clever way at all! I don't get the meaning?!
I am sorry but I can't imagine this being a winner in a contest.
The picture is creative and yet it doesn't make up for the poem.
Anyway, thank you for sharing.
Jesse
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2022
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One liners really you still don't need them?
This isn't a cliche and it isn't used in a clever way at all! I don't get the meaning?!
I am sorry but I can't imagine this being a winner in a contest.
The picture is creative and yet it doesn't make up for the poem.
Anyway, thank you for sharing.
Jesse
Comment Written 16-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2022
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Thank you!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
So true, Mystery Author. I enjoyed your fun contest
entry. Your few words made a great statement that I
agree with.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2022
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So true, Mystery Author. I enjoyed your fun contest
entry. Your few words made a great statement that I
agree with.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan
Comment Written 16-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2022
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Thank you!
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
I am not sure I understand this and did not want to give you below 5 stars because of my need for explanation.
You were clever and creative with the prompt.
My interpretation is that you can communicate without sight, sound or speech.
Please forgive me if I am way off base here.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2022
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I am not sure I understand this and did not want to give you below 5 stars because of my need for explanation.
You were clever and creative with the prompt.
My interpretation is that you can communicate without sight, sound or speech.
Please forgive me if I am way off base here.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 15-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2022
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Thank you!
Comment from royowen
It's very difficult to write an original quote, but we can but a different slant on an existing one, and I think you've done well here, you have done a good job here, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2022
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It's very difficult to write an original quote, but we can but a different slant on an existing one, and I think you've done well here, you have done a good job here, blessings Roy
Comment Written 15-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2022
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Thank you! I'm glad you think so.
