Time Flies
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Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
This was a beautiful entry for the Cliche' It Ain't So writing prompt contest.
I loved your poem about being in line for the women's bathroom ... lol, so true.
Well done. Goodluck in the contest.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason".- Novalis
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2022
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This was a beautiful entry for the Cliche' It Ain't So writing prompt contest.
I loved your poem about being in line for the women's bathroom ... lol, so true.
Well done. Goodluck in the contest.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason".- Novalis
Comment Written 16-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2022
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thanks for the good wishes. I think the non-reviewers are men :)
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
A cleverly done rewording of a common cliche. The statement you make is so true, especially at large events. The font is large enough to be read easily. The visual is perfect. I like how you made the tile the cliche. That's for sure starting with the cliche first. lol I think you got the prompt rewrite as intended. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2022
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A cleverly done rewording of a common cliche. The statement you make is so true, especially at large events. The font is large enough to be read easily. The visual is perfect. I like how you made the tile the cliche. That's for sure starting with the cliche first. lol I think you got the prompt rewrite as intended. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2022
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thanks, Sandra.
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You are Welcome.
Comment from GARY MACLEAN
I am always amazed at the differences between the lines for the men's room and the ladies' room. Do we men really go that fast? or are you ladies just that slow??
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2022
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I am always amazed at the differences between the lines for the men's room and the ladies' room. Do we men really go that fast? or are you ladies just that slow??
Comment Written 16-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2022
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well, one female reader suggested that maybe men didn't take the time to wash their hands, BUT That didn't come from me. Beats me, except women always look in the mirror to either put on lipstick or mess with their hair. Takes time.
Thanks for reading, and I hope I answered your questions. :)
Comment from Rachelle Allen
...and PREGNANT!! Then, time is glacial! Absolutely FANTASTIC entry and the perfect picture to go along with it. This is great. I hope all the voters love it.
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2022
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...and PREGNANT!! Then, time is glacial! Absolutely FANTASTIC entry and the perfect picture to go along with it. This is great. I hope all the voters love it.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2022
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Thanks so much, Rachelle. I don't think the men are voting for it, but I love your comments. thanks again.
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Hahaha!! Yes, you're right! Good point. They have no concept. (I remember a woman in line one time asking the woman next to her, "Why is there never a line for the men's bathroom?" The second woman answered, "Because it takes time to wipe, flush, and wash your hands." Now, I think that EVERY TIME I'm somewhere and waiting to use the ladies' room.
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they're a different species, alright!
Comment from Erika Seshadri
Ha! Ain't that the truth. This is a super cute entry for the Cliche It Ain't So Prompt. Good luck!!
I think all these entries would look better in poem format, but I guess this is the default for the contest... ???
Have a great day,
Erika
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2022
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Ha! Ain't that the truth. This is a super cute entry for the Cliche It Ain't So Prompt. Good luck!!
I think all these entries would look better in poem format, but I guess this is the default for the contest... ???
Have a great day,
Erika
Comment Written 15-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2022
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yep. I think they just want a one-liner.
Thanks for your comments!
Comment from rspoet
This is an excellent entry for the cliche contest,
time never flies when you need it to,
and the older you get the more you need it to only fly
when you want.
Nicely done with good picture.
Best wishes.
Robert
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2022
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This is an excellent entry for the cliche contest,
time never flies when you need it to,
and the older you get the more you need it to only fly
when you want.
Nicely done with good picture.
Best wishes.
Robert
Comment Written 14-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2022
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thank you, Robert. It's flying too fast for me, I can tell you.
I appreciate your comments and good wishes.
Comment from Raul1
I find this cliche hilarious and flat out funny. There is some dark humor in this poem. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Good job! I have enjoyed reading it. Thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2022
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I find this cliche hilarious and flat out funny. There is some dark humor in this poem. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Good job! I have enjoyed reading it. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 14-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2022
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and thank you for your neat comments!
Comment from Michaela Moore
So true! Men will never understand your contest piece or the woes of menstrual cycles, pregnancy, or birthing a child. But for a woman, this poem is right on! Thanks for this! It made my night.
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2022
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So true! Men will never understand your contest piece or the woes of menstrual cycles, pregnancy, or birthing a child. But for a woman, this poem is right on! Thanks for this! It made my night.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2022
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Thank you so much!! What a compliment!
