Fur Babies
A Senryu on pets37 total reviews
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Oooh! Good one! I can absolutely picture it! It is good enough to be enjoyable on its own, but I want to add that I also like the picture you chose to accompany it. Nice work!
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2022
  |
Oooh! Good one! I can absolutely picture it! It is good enough to be enjoyable on its own, but I want to add that I also like the picture you chose to accompany it. Nice work!
Comment Written 17-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2022
-
Thank you so much. The photo is my ginger boy sleeping on a weath destined for the front door.
-
My cat likes overtaking unusual places, too. Part of their charm, I guess. A seven-year-old piano student of mine said, "Our cat is the boss of all our furniture."
-
Wise child
Comment from K. Lang-Slattery
In so few words you have created a picture of two different color cats playing in autumn leaves. It is a lovely short Haiku.... (too bad the illustration isn't more playful to match the spirit of the poem.)
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2022
|
In so few words you have created a picture of two different color cats playing in autumn leaves. It is a lovely short Haiku.... (too bad the illustration isn't more playful to match the spirit of the poem.)
Comment Written 17-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2022
-
Thank you. My ginger boy was tuckered out and decided to nap on a wreath meant for the front door instead of posing. Glad you liked it.
Comment from Sanku
Black cat and ginger cat! The ginger cat is an absolute ball of softness. the fallen leaves surround them .The days are going fast and soon Halloween would come!
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2022
|
Black cat and ginger cat! The ginger cat is an absolute ball of softness. the fallen leaves surround them .The days are going fast and soon Halloween would come!
Comment Written 17-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2022
-
You have shared my vision! Thank you for reading.
Comment from Fleedleflump
Aww, I love the piccy and the senryu has an ingenious double image. I have two halloweens and one falling leaves myself, and I bet they'd love to be so characterised.
Mike
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2022
|
Aww, I love the piccy and the senryu has an ingenious double image. I have two halloweens and one falling leaves myself, and I bet they'd love to be so characterised.
Mike
Comment Written 17-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2022
-
I bet you are right. Thanks for reading.
Comment from Cindy Warren
You make it easy to imagine those cats skittering among the leaves. I can see them scaring the daylights out of the little trick or treaters, and then going home to curl up and sleep.
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2022
|
You make it easy to imagine those cats skittering among the leaves. I can see them scaring the daylights out of the little trick or treaters, and then going home to curl up and sleep.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2022
-
Yes. That's how I saw them, too. Thank you for reading
Comment from MissMerri
This is a lovely fall poem, or is it a cat poem? Both, I guess. I liked it a lot, because I am very fond of fur babies. And... I like falling leaves too. Your words create a definite mood that feels like autumn. MM
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2022
|
This is a lovely fall poem, or is it a cat poem? Both, I guess. I liked it a lot, because I am very fond of fur babies. And... I like falling leaves too. Your words create a definite mood that feels like autumn. MM
Comment Written 16-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2022
-
Thank you for your kind words. Fall is my favorite time of year.
Comment from Aussie
All animals go crazy when we let fireworks off; they are frightened by the noise and smell of cordite. It has been banned here. Your Senryu tells the story in three little lines. Thanks for sharing. K xx
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2022
|
All animals go crazy when we let fireworks off; they are frightened by the noise and smell of cordite. It has been banned here. Your Senryu tells the story in three little lines. Thanks for sharing. K xx
Comment Written 16-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2022
-
Yes, fireworks are not friends to animals.
Than you for reading.
Comment from Mark D. R.
Nancy,
Nice early Halloween themed poem you penned. Your orange background is a good connect with ginger and falling leaves. 'Black cat' imagery reinforces Halloween theme.
Mark
P.S. IMHO ... your initial capital letters in your first and third line are unnecessary. Consider raising your font size to improve your presentation value to other FS reviewers. I typically use 22-point text in a bold format
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2022
|
Nancy,
Nice early Halloween themed poem you penned. Your orange background is a good connect with ginger and falling leaves. 'Black cat' imagery reinforces Halloween theme.
Mark
P.S. IMHO ... your initial capital letters in your first and third line are unnecessary. Consider raising your font size to improve your presentation value to other FS reviewers. I typically use 22-point text in a bold format
Comment Written 16-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2022
-
Thank you for you comments. I have just learned how to increase the font size, so I can use that in future. I am glad you liked it.
Comment from Ric Myworld
Skittering cats is using a word that describes a cats' action most of the time. LOL. Thanks for sharing another fine poem about one of our favorite little fury friends.
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2022
|
Skittering cats is using a word that describes a cats' action most of the time. LOL. Thanks for sharing another fine poem about one of our favorite little fury friends.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2022
-
I agree--skittering is definitely a cat word. Thank you for your kind words.
Comment from Jasmine Girl
You used a few words or syllables to describe Halloween using cat images. I can see them in action, scurrying around in the dark night. This could be a Haiku Club entry for last week. I entered two.
It's to write a scary senryu for this week's assignment.
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2022
|
You used a few words or syllables to describe Halloween using cat images. I can see them in action, scurrying around in the dark night. This could be a Haiku Club entry for last week. I entered two.
It's to write a scary senryu for this week's assignment.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2022
-
Thank you. I appreciate your comments.
