Coulda, Woulda, Shoulda
It might be tomorrow.24 total reviews
Comment from leather
You used the most elegant image of Christ with your one-line entry. The content will most likely be accurate; however, the word "bumming" certainly rhymes with "coming," but bumming sounds a tad casual for the topic.
Best wishes.
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2022
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You used the most elegant image of Christ with your one-line entry. The content will most likely be accurate; however, the word "bumming" certainly rhymes with "coming," but bumming sounds a tad casual for the topic.
Best wishes.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2022
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Thanks, leather. I agree about "bumming", but I was stuck.
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I also had some difficulty with my one-liner. Ah well, some things we let go of so we can move on to other things.
Comment from Jesse James Doty
The title, though misleading, drew me in to read this poem. I do not like being misled.
The humming of the second coming surely rhymes but is not in the tune with what I want to hum and therefore I am not happy with this author for misleading me.
No thanks to you I am writing how I feel.
Jesse
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2022
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The title, though misleading, drew me in to read this poem. I do not like being misled.
The humming of the second coming surely rhymes but is not in the tune with what I want to hum and therefore I am not happy with this author for misleading me.
No thanks to you I am writing how I feel.
Jesse
Comment Written 14-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2022
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The coulda, woulda, shoulda is what the bumming crowd is thinking about their past deeds.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I fear you're telling the truth with this contest entry. Yes, we know Jesus will come, but I really wonder how many people are ready. As I look at society, I fear many are not. Thank you for sharing this entry with us. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2022
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I fear you're telling the truth with this contest entry. Yes, we know Jesus will come, but I really wonder how many people are ready. As I look at society, I fear many are not. Thank you for sharing this entry with us. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2022
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Thanks, Barb. You are right. There are going to be a lot of people who will have to face the music.
Comment from Sally Law
Sorry for no six for this important message. The unbelieving are many. I writing about this right now. I will have to divide the chapters in parts. The Bible predicts that many will be caught off guard at the second coming of Christ and many will be cursing our blessed Savior even then. Too bad. Hell is a terrible place.
Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sal :))
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reply by the author on 14-Jul-2022
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Sorry for no six for this important message. The unbelieving are many. I writing about this right now. I will have to divide the chapters in parts. The Bible predicts that many will be caught off guard at the second coming of Christ and many will be cursing our blessed Savior even then. Too bad. Hell is a terrible place.
Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sal :))
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Comment Written 14-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2022
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Thanks, Sal. I'll be looking for your piece.
